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Finally...finished within 2 days (may I remind you that actually I have to work and read during free time) again...this sequel is quite startling!

As this story contained so many hurt and violence, I found this is addictive but at the same time heart-breaking, especially when I read the part of Harry's being mistreated and tortured...though still this ended with goodness, it is not that comforting (at least I am not satisfied)......well, may I say that there is a 2 years and 8 months gone... how is Harry being healed, the reason behind, Draco's thoughs, Maia's help, Snape's and last but least - change of heart of Lucis...

If possible, though it is really late for asking, may I ask a sequel's sequel?

You finished! Finally! I have been coming back to check every now and then and today saw you finished it! Great New Year's present!

You say you've been on LJ? what's your journal? Do you have this series up there where I can add it to my memories? I know you get a lot of reviews, but if you could email me the link to your journal I would love it.

OK, for some reason my email didn't come across last time so here it is:

Atana_blackfox @ yahoo.com,

Question, why is it so suprising that she's a subicio? Can female indago's be superos? Ohhh, Should've known Harry wasn't okay. He never is! Why does he want to top so bad? Especially after all him and Draco went through to prevent it...but it wasn't long though...hmmm....Draco's back! YES!! And sarcastic, as usual, haha. He's never seen Harry and Hermoine fight...wait, actually, they never hav-wait, nope they have, even in this fic. Anywho, I hope Hermoine tattles so Draco can fix this, not leave Harry, but fix this. Glad that in desperate times, both Draco and Hermoine are willing to help each other out. Oh, nope, it's the same problem....and he's dealing with it, hahaha, poor harry *pout*....ahh, see? You make me confused. okay, the poker is going a tee bit too far.My god! Oooh, and Hermoine left with a bang!!! Omg, what is Harry saying? Why's he saying this? Poor DRaco! Harry's just stabbing at the wound.What the hell? He's not gonna drop the baby!!! I'll die if he drops the baby. WHAT THE HELLL???/? If that baby dies, no amount of sorries, I love yous, I don't remember this happening, will change anything. PLEASE DON'T LET THE BABY BE DEAD....kills me to go on,..

Muroch! Ugh! I forgot all about him. Ofcourse, Draco didn't trust him, stupid bastard! DRACO DID NOT SAY ALL THAT! This is drivng me crazy! Draco please find the poor boy, he STILL doesn't know why he's acting this way, and even if he's a bit messed up, I don't want the poor boy to suffer under those werewolves and Muroch! God, and Lucius is making it worse! Aaah so HE put those pheromones inside Harry....yay! Potter isn't crazy, thank god!!! I want a happy ending so bad!!! But urgh!!!! I felt bad for Muroch, but stooping that low!! My god!Awww, poor Ably! Logan actually gave out the info? That sucks, really wished Logan/Snape would've worked out.Awww, poor harry. He has the wrong idea. DRACO FIND HIM!!!! UGH! DRACO WAS SO CLOSE!! HARRY WAS COMING ALONG!!! By the end of this, I swear I won't have any hair left!!Finally! Harry won against his subicio! Wow, that was one show-down! But Harry is safe...and exactly where he needs to be. I hope he regains conciousness real soon. Draco is so sweet, still chiding and talking to him as if nothing was wrong. I love the boy more and more as teh chapters go on.Lucius' speech was a bit...heartwarming? Odd....Hope Harry heard taht! Aww, and Harry feels guilty! That bastard MUROCH! I like the interaction between all three of them, and I'm glad Goyle found someone ^_^. Aawwww, she sounds so cute when she talks! Aww I want a Maia, she is cute. Hahaha, it'd be a cute sight to see SEverus dance though. Lucius and Harry getting along....my god...a miracle! Hahaha, Maia's just like her dad--DRaco that is.I love her answers to the interviews. AWWW!!! I want a Maia really bad!! ^_^....where have I heard taht before? I can see it in your eyes? Didn't Draco say that to Harry last time? Such a cute ending! Glad their all happy--as they should be. Their life won't always be a bed of roses, but I'm glad it ended that way.

THANK U!

Awww, poor Logan. He's feeling alone and lonely. I would too if my hubby moved in with a couple of hotties. I like how chumy Snape and HArry are getting, nothing sexual, but quite sweet. AWWW! THEY HAVE THEIR BABY!!! And it's a girl!! How cute!And Harry's maternalness (Sp?) so cute too! It'd be crazy to go through all that just to touch the cute little one, but hell, it's understandable. I'd be pretty protective too. 'She's perfect... ofcourse' lol! HAHA, the baby has Snape's eyes! But i'm glad the kid belongs to all of them. Snape deserves it afterall he's done, and you can tell he likes the kid already. Who wouldn't? She's perfect, ofcourse! But a giggling Snape in a sense, odd as it is, is still pretty amusingly cute. Poor Draco, all this conflict. Can't imagine what that must feel like with all this....*sniff* but now snape has to go...bet logan will be happy about this. *sigh* you make me like Luicius...alot--I liked him a bit before--but all these ridiculous parties! UGH! Hahaha, maybe in a year or two, when the baby finally gets the dreadful babysitter it'll take months to convince they get--snape perhaps....maybe then Draco can have Harry alone. Till then, tough luck buddy. Might as well get acquainted with that right hand.

At first I was against Harry for getting mad at Draco, then against Draco for being a jealous, incosiderate asshole--though I love jealousy, then against Harry cause Draco was just trying to be protective, and then I was like screw this!!! Harry wised up and was all over Draco and I was like, I don't care anymore! YES! Draco won't have to wait for a year or two now! Bet Draco's going to be doing alot of protecting from now on, damn! Harry's really horny, yeah? All all the weird shit Draco calls out, Venus's tits, Merlin's cock....uh huh.... lol. Hahahaha, Harry arrogant...I love it.And Draco having a conversation with his infant kid. Priceless. It doesn't get cutter than that. I would be recording this and awwing if I were there. Damn! Luicius, do you never learn? Keep your damn mouth shut! I swear, there'll never be a peaceful father in law moment with harry ever! Wow...these 2 are always fighting, no? Sounds like me and my sister. If we don't fight atleast twice a day...something is wrong. Oh yeah, I knew Harry's request would be to be on top! This should be exciting. Love how they kept fighting their insticts. Awww, Draco said no...understandable, but it was a delicious thought! Maybe oneday...afterall, their love is thicker than their insticts...right? Hell, who wouldn't like a submissive Draco either....wow! That scene was very disatisfying though, I have to agree....but can't wait for that thought to be put into action. ^_^

Damn, isn't Harry sassy? "I'm the boy who lived, I can fry you like that....I demand to speak to someone higher that you?" Well....hahhaha..LOL!! Kinsley wants his body.....oh god, this is so crazy! But poor thing, he's being surrounded. Probably things they want his baby...nope, draco....Omg...all that for lunch? Awww, poor Harry...he may be a bit crazy but he did take time to do that lunch. AHHAHAH, snapes still evil, wow...Ooohh, so all Harry needed was love. Wohoo! Go Hermoine, telling Harry to shove it. And snape and her getting along....scary. But what the hell? Now Harry is trying to kill her? The drama never ends, does it? Is he jealous? Of Snape and Hermoine....lol!!! OMG, he is. Hahaha, guess they weren't really getting along afterall. It's so funny how their both ignoring the poor boy. I could've died when Snape crushed his crackers when Harry threw the zeus thing at him. aWwwww, harry's in a box, hahaha.Lol, Harry's got Draco wipped, subico or not, but either way, Draco's finally working his common sense and keeping his lover under control, i'm proud. And no harry, you're not a freak....That parkiensen dude is a dumbass, but damn...that was a bit scary, the gravy part too. But hey, he had fair warning. Atleast he wised up in the end.

Awww, I just adore Ably, poor baby.I want an Ably. I was totally in love with Dobby, but Ably sadly beats that little elf by a long run. Hahaha, and Ron gets funnier every minute. Hmm, it was interesting learning about those other Superos, definetly have the feeling we'll be seeing them later. And this new life in America sounds interesting. No more Ron or Hermoine (Pout), but Harry and Draco are so cute! And a new baby is on the way! YES! I loved that chapter too, with the party and Draco/Harry's midnight conversation, it was so cute, loving, and gentle. I just love the way they love each other, and the small things--DRaco softening, Harry sniffing Draco's underwear, how they both melt instantly after a fight cause it's so unbearable to stay mad for long ^_^. And Snape and Harry's friendship....sorta...is so amusing! Lucius and Narcissa...caring..to Harry....huh, who would've thunk it? Also, mood swings in stuff like this would make me kinda irked because some people overdo it to the point the character is just downright evil, but with Harry it's so amusing!!! I can't help snickering, reminds me of the 5th book--everyone hated pissy Harry, but I thought it was so humorous added with all the pity I felt for the poor guy. Sometimes, I feel like i'm reading the books, the character are really THAT exact most and basically the entire time. Hell, but if I were Hermoine in that situation, I'd either be laughing my ass of or going bezerck...mostly laughing my ass off at the hormonal teen--neither being wise. The Ron thing was a little below the belt though. Coincidence, I just finished watching a music video about Ron wanting to be like Harry, and all that jealousy crap. Oooh, where did Harry go? God, that boy is a handful. WOnder how Malfoy does it. Sometimes, i'm really glad that i'm a girl. I have all the reasons to be hormonal and I never have to be on the outside wrath of it ^____________^

From the moment I stumbled across your fanfic, Indago (and by relation, Indago:Reborn) it has been like a book I can't seem to put down. I was a bit shaky at first by the portrayal of Harry's bleak outlook, lack of any sort of free will (for apparantly all time), and Draco's cruelty... but I stuck with it and have been quite impressed by your writing style, and your conviction to pursue your muse the way you see fit.
I will admit that it is difficult to see Harry so different from our regular Harry, but I can get around it.
Mostly I wanted to commend you on your interaction between Maia and Draco at the end of chapter 19. You have a way of cleverly wording it that I could picture in my head 2 scenes; interaction between father and daughter, and a man confidently talking to himself. It was very amusing and I loved every minute of it.
Keep up the good work!