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YAY!!! Maia is ALIVE!!!! I'm Sooooooo Happy!
Awe...Dwayco Bwoke 'is wittle arm...
Noooooo! Harry's MIA and Psychotic....
Atleast I'm not on the edge any more, Very happy for this well written update.

You're good. You're really good.

oh, poor harry! even more, por draco. I think it's Lucius that has poisened Harry, now that he has made an heir for the malfoys. :-/ That would have been so him, somehow. Hope Harry's allright.
looking forward to the next chapter

That was great!! Please let it be something in his blood or illness that's making Harry act like that!!! Please update ASAP!!!!

That was great!! Please let it be something in his blood or illness that's making Harry act like that!!! Please update ASAP!!!!

um, yay that draco saved mia, i guess. *laughs* don't mean to sound so unenthusiastic *waves hand* ignore me. ^.^ hehe, i'm the one that's always rooting for the angst. i really am glad he saved her though. i luved the fighting. *chuckles* and harry prob WILL just walk right in through the front door, knowing him. hm, hope they find him or something of the sort. ^.- great chap!

ho..hum..heehee...i wonder where potty is. hm. let me think. maybe wid' 'de amerikan. lol maybe with the american. or in a pub getting drunk. or dancing in a club, while he's drunk. heehee. man, you raise the most brain-scratching questions with these chapters. i wonder, what IS happening with harry? too many hormones or something. gosh. keep up the great updates.

WOW now we're talking...I loved this chapter...Now I may not be ur average reader for as much as I enjoy bottom harry my fav is when its both ways for our favourite boys....I have to say I had to stop myself reading ur original fic because it was physically painful to read how abusive draco was towards harry n the whole punishing threesome with snape was torture for until a friend let me know that things were changing when they discovered harry was pregnant n that draco finally wised up n started havin feelings for harry...As for this one I have to admit that u took me for a rollercoaster of reactions...It's very admirable how u've painted draco as a loving husband who struggles to maintain a happy balanced marriage n satisfy his indago insticts...But I cant help but resent the whole dominant issue along with physical domistic abuse...I really hope u do not condone such behaviour! As I said I've always enjoyed bottom harry but urs seems to be broken like there's almost no chemistry...Everytime draco doesnt get his way he turns to the pheromones n harry is left wronged n worse of all left to feel like he should be happy n content with whatever draco or snape dictate coz that's all he's made for...I was gettin really interested in the plot when harry was showing rebeling tendencies...I obviously dont know we're u're goin with this coz this story is ur baby after all n wether its some chemical imbalance or someone castin a curse but as i read into what i want to happen, to me its harry's defence mechanism against a life of bein a slave which he was never happy about n he's finally had enough n it would be ideal for the two sides to merge n for things to change between him n draco but that's wishful thinkin...I never doubted that mia wont get hurt n i find it interestin that snape n draco rnt really blamin pheromones or insanity n that draco feels it was harry's choice to behave this way...maybe he's ready to accept that his harry is no longer the pet he wants him to be...Im sorry for bein overly criticisin n forgive me if my review didnt make sense i just hate to think of the boys as animals ruled by instinct...this definitely puts a new spin on things! love it!
Cheers

Thank Merlin you didnt kill the baby. I cannot wait until you update and let us know what Snape finds... I am hoping (and begging) that this is a happy ending... I really want this to end happily. I hope Harry is ok... Please update soon!!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~

still wondering WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH HARRY!!!...did he somehow manage to find ...oh god whats his name..the American? cant wait for more!!