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Oh, my god. This story just keeps geting better! I'm on the edge of my computer chair wanting to know what happens! Please post more!

AMAZING! simply amazing. i knew something had to be terribly wrong with Harry?? Are they gonna be able to track Muroch down???PLEASE DONT HARM HARRY!!! ILL CRY!!!

update soon puuuleasssse DX

Harry is going to be raped by both Murdoch and the werewolf???? He's going to be crazed by the time Snape and Draco get to him.

Thought I would pop in and thank you for writing a great story. Remember folks, this is the person that wrote Indigo and you loved that story. There were trying times in that story as well. Trust your author for she seems to need no suggestions on how to write better, her grammer is just fine, past that, we really have no right to interfere in the creation of someone elses original work. To do so is to ruin the integrity of the first story. Remember, our reviews are only to improve a story, not to take it out of the authors hands and continue on our merry way and write it the way we want to. If we were so good at that, then we would have written our own story and I doubt that we would want anyone to mess with our story if we did. The Doctor.

I love this story, can't say that enough. Great idea, I was sure it was daddy Malfoy, a great bit of intrigue.

Yea!!!!!!! You set up the story so well that the natural progression is playing out beautifully. Lot's of hints from the beginning point to a well planned story. I love this AU!!! (P.S. Do you ever think Draco would let Harry breed a child for him?)

P.S. About your AN. You were right in that your warnings did say there would be plenty of nastiness. The problem is that we read those warnings when we start a story only. If the story is written in serial form, like most fic's on this site, then we never read the warnings again as we avidly pick up from where we left off from the previous week or month that we've read. I too was guilty of getting drawn into a story that was fascinating, with my favorite characters and a juicy/hot plot only to find both characters were killed in the final chapter. One of the few flames I've ever sent was to that one for a lack of warning and another for just incredibly bad taste. Being a teacher, and seeing all the grammar/spelling/plot misstakes in these stories, that should tell you how upset I was because I never pick on another's grammar/spelling/plot mistakes. I know how hard it is to write and I'm so proud to see people who want to write and share stories for fun that I either ignore the mistakes and enjoy the plot or stop reading that fic. I think you came across someone who either missed the warning or was having a bad day. And they gave you one and it was passed around. Please don't let some jerk discourage you!!!! They are entitled to their opinion, but all of your other readers should be more than enough to balance the occassional bad review. Personally, I can't write a story for shi* and I enjoy your AU very much. You managed to create such a convincing universe with cool new creatures and two amazinginly interesting/exciting/adventurous plots that I wish you could feel proud about what you've done. The stories aren't always fluff and fun; they also include drama and angst but that rollor coaster of feelings is what makes them so exciting! I can see this story coming to it's conclusion soon and when it does I'm hoping you'll still want to write more stories, even different one's, and share them with us, too!!!

oh, wow! I just can't wait for more!!! Poor Harry!!! And poor Ably! The mean werewolves (at least...that's what I think) ate her parents!!! Gah!!! That's just creepy!!! Please update soon!

my heart is racing.. but atleast we know what is up with harry now... i can tell you that i was nearly in tears during the whole 'i have you harry' thing... *sigh* i wait for the next chapter with baited breath and hope that it doesn't take too long..

why are you amazing ? cause im spellbound everytime i read you stuff !!! your feaking inccredible !!!! i love you !!!