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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person anonymous
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NEED MORE NOW!!!! I really hope Draco and Snape finds Harry soon, and than give it good to Muroch. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T TAKE THE SUSPENSE ANYMORE
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I forgot all about him! Need chapter 28! Will Draco want a mate that carries another's child? Poor Harry! Is he okay?
person Kayla
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I liked that one. Gives lots of info. Poor Harry <|3 He must be so goddamned HEARTbroken.

The length is getting better, but it could still be longer. Take a look at Water, by kissherdraco. She's put together an AMAZING story, D/Hr. And it has really good length. Took my like.. 10 minutes to finish one chapter.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!! Things are finally falling into place! Oh God please dont kill Harry!!! Or worse make him have a a baby with that damn American! You are a brilliant writer and I cannot wait for more!! Please update soon!!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
person angelstarfire
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... this is getting good. :P I actually really liked this chapter... hehe. It is finally bringing pieces of the story together! *can't wait for the next chapter*
person Kayla
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I liked that one. Gives lots of info. Poor Harry D: He must be so goddamned HEARTbroken.

The length is getting better, but it could still be longer. Take a look at Water, by kissherdraco. She's put together an AMAZING story, D/Hr. And it has really good length. Took my like.. 10 minutes to finish one chapter.
person Storm
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally back at school and able to be on the internet for indefinite periods of time. Loved the updates. I found them fascinating. My Heart jumped in fear when Harry let go of Maia. I was worried something would happen and then Draco would really go insane on him. Great work. I enjoyed it immensely. I can't wait to see what Snape and Draco do to those others. Slightly off topic question. Didn't you have another story on here that was a completed challenge, it was like 7 or 8 chapters long where Harry dances in a Faery circle, Draco finds him and binds him to himself and it goes from there for those two to work out their new relationship? I can't remember the name of it, but I was trying to tell my friend to read it and I couldn't find it. I thought you were the author but I could be mistaken. Am I or is it yours and where could she find it to read it, I told her it was a must read. I left my email address if you know what I'm talking about and could hopefully please let me know? Thanks! Great job again!
person sternschen
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, a review was long overdue! Finally we know why Harry acted like an arse and thank the all mighty Gods
that it isn't some after birht thing which I first suspected. You made us all forget about that american who has a reservation
for a straight-jacket. I feel really sorry for Harry woulnd't surprise me if he becomes a tad suicidal after he remembers that he
tried to kill his baby.
But I remembered lustrum. The big question is: How far away or how close is it? Will they find Harry in time? Is Remus going to find him?
Okay, keep working. You are creating a wonderful story. You had me hooked from the first chapter of Indago.

Bye Sternschen
person lita
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O..M..G!!! This is getting really good. I love this story!! I'm so glad there finally finding out what's happening to Harry!!! This chapter had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! And you brought back a character from the first part of Indago. Please update ASAP!!! I soooo can't wait to see what they do when Draco/Sev finally does find out!!
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god. This story just keeps geting better! I'm on the edge of my computer chair wanting to know what happens! Please post more!