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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person LadyJane
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor poor ably, having her parents killed and being threatened with the killing of her siblings... sooo mean how that evil git tricked her into it!
person NightShade
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy it was not Lucius... I will cut Muroch to little pieces and give him to crows to eat him! Poor Harry! I hope werewolves will not hurt him. I hope Remus would be able to find him... OMG it is excellent!
person ChasteBlush
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW FUCKING AMAZING!!!

Its all happening now, that was so action packed at the beginning and then the spy work, detective Draco and Sergent Snape to the rescue, i like it, i like it a lot!

Was absolutly tremendous, that bloody american guy should be bloody shot, if i were a wolf i'd be crying out for his blood!

But i sussed you out, he's involved with werewolves isnt he, so Lupins gonna find out and tell them, helop save Harry and Draco migh conisder lettign him go near Harry and the baby!
Oh SO EXCITING!!!!
UPDTE ASAP!!!! PLEASE!!!!!

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person Arwen Applestone
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - that was an awesome chapter. Very enlightening too. I have been wondering for the last few chapters if Harry was morphing into a Supero for some reason, but I guess he was just being fed the pheromones. By his own elf, no less.

Yikes! I can't wait to read more. I hope Draco and Severus get to Harry on time!

Please update...it hurts to read, but I need to know what happens next.

Thanks for the great chappie - and for not keeping us in suspense any more about what was happening.

Cheers,
Arwen
person Phebes
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was an excellent chapter! Now everything is
falling into place... ah, I hope Harry will be ok! Save him Draco! :D
person RD Wind
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the "Excellence in Writing" award goes to: INDAGO 2: REBORN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

{{{the crowd goes wild!!}}}



person Aunt Bijou
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, honey, thank you for updating so soon, and I hope you update just as quickly again. I will admit, right now, reading this is so stressful, Auntie's heart is just pounding, and if she could, she'd write herself right into your fic just so she could swoop in and rescue Harry! But that's what shows how good this is, that you've got her heart pounding so! I'm trembling! Oh, soon, soon, so Auntie can cheer when Draco and Severus rescue him!
person sak
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with some of your readers that this back and forth of Harry's was difficult to take, but I suspected what you revealed in this chapter--the rogue Supero was the cause. I did not see the werewolf twist, but I am hoping for a happy conclusion. Dougal does not sound like a reasonable individual.
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! You better update soon! 'Cause if you don't... :P Seriously, though update soon! Gah! Those damn werewolves!
person WretchedScar
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goooooooooooooooooooooooood this is FABULOUS! I'm not backing out! Life is harsh sometimes and sometimes stories reflect that - fictional or otherwise. You have yet to disappoint me - KEEP GOING! And for the love of god, DONT HOLD BACK!

Awesome, awasome stuff!