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by harriet

schedule November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hawd
person hokuto92
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I agree, Severus Snape is also my favorite character. Love the little story that you put at the end. XD
person Chapter 1
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"shoulders of anticipation"
Funny typo
person x
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"truly amazing feet"
funny typo
person Fate-Angel
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I wish there was more
=^-^=
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always my dear..

xoxo
kyusaiimaru
person Catium
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape, Harry and Vampires, my favourites all in one story....
Loving it.
person Ansku
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good one :) I don't usually go for fics where Harry changes sides but this was just suitably light (? I really don't know what word to use, but even if I can't really justify this one, it will do) to make it enjoyable for me :) I like your writing style.
person kitti
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as this is the first story of yours that i have read, i can only say that i am looking forward to reading the rest of your HP stories. your not to bad, and i like your style. thanks for a wonderful short-story. look for me in further reviews on other stories =D

there is a muse in all of us. (yours just so happens to be better than mine =D)
person Rez
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn...

Absolutely breataking, well, when you\'re in the mood for it at least. I most certainly was, and it makes a girl crave a little something of her own afterwards. Such a shame that there aren\'t many more of the type floating around. I could use another quick fix.

Other than a few technical errors, this was wonderfully written. Careful evasion of using the word \'Vampire\' was noted, and intriguing. Most authors would have thrown it around in attempt to dispel overusing a term in one small block of writing. You managed however, and it was beautiful. Keen elements were brought together to make the story\'s main elements brighter. The descriptive language was amazing and even more enjoyable was the dramatic characterization of the players. I especially enjoyed the Harry you tempered. Equal to one, submissive to another, and yet neither could ever truely control him. Insatiable lust, and a will weak as gold...precious, and malleable, despite it\'s worth.

Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I will most definately check out some of your other stories, if this is anything to go by.

Rez