rate_review Reviews

I have been absolutely blown away! I read all of your stories and oh my god! They are excellent! write more! more! MORE! lol.

AHH !!! I so want to be her right now !! i mean give it to me and give it to me hard !!! Alone time now lol !!!! love it keep it up !!

Please, write more. Write more. Please. This was beautiful. I love it that Hermione drives like a reckless demon. I love it that you made Harry angsty (does he come in any other way?) I love it that he told her that he gave her a chance to leave, and that she was now his. And then I love it when she tells him, "There's no forcing the willing." How true, how true.

Thank you for sharing this.

that was a really good story...it was different from the rest...and that is why i liked it soo much

WOW! VERY DISCRIPTIVE, I LOVED IT! YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER. IN FACT I\'VE ONLY READ 2 HARRY POTTER FAN FICS AND I REALIZED THAT BOTH OF THEM WERE YOURS! PLEASE KEEP DOING WHAT YOU ARE DOING! DID YOU EVER THINK ABOUT DOING IT PROFESSIONALLY WITH YOUR OWN ORGINAL CHARACTERS? THAT\'S HOW GOOD YOU ARE!

RATING: 10 OUT OF 10

This is awesome, but the stereotypical repeating letters of the orgasm scene is a little too forced, and seems almost comical, which detracts from the eloquency of the rest of the piece. This is definitely one of my favorites though, otherwise; fantastic use of canon and beautiful beginning.

Really enjoyed your short story, I\'m left wondering what happened to them after,
perhaps a sequeal?

Wow....uh.....wow. Nothing else to say-- that was awesome! Oh, and I agree about the ice pack!

Holy cow! That was the most intense thing I have read in ages. You can almost feel the power and the magick rolling off of them in wave after wave. All the years of denial, and repression for the \"good of the Wizarding world\" came pouring out in that single act of passion. Absolutely amazing. I loved it! I really like this Harry. Not some martyrish little boy that whines and scuffs his feet in the dirt. I love the powerful, and passionate Harry that hasn\'t got all the answers. When he lets his emotions run wild and is just Harry. You captured that admirably. If AFF had a favorites folder this would be in it in a heartbeat. (stand and applauds and whistles loudly)!

hot, very hot.