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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read the second chapter out loud and you will find misused words: eight instead of either; to instead of two; et cetera. One or two are easy to overlook, but, almost each paragraph has these misused words. Reading it aloud will help avoid such mistakes.
www.dictionary.com and www.askoxford.com are great sites to help you keep on your linguistic toes.
www.dictionary.com and www.askoxford.com are great sites to help you keep on your linguistic toes.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!! What happens next?
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, but more the meaning, Something we can all take a lesson on \"Miscommunication\"
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What took Sevvy so long? Now he can lock them up in a nice little room together so they can screw their brains out, yes?
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh too funny! Chapter 3 please!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was terribly cute...and human nature being what it is- the hysterical reaction of everyone is probably accurate.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story you should write more!!
Lots of Love,
Lindsey A.k.a Narcissa
Lots of Love,
Lindsey A.k.a Narcissa