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by tas

person jj
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Salt allergy? Ummm, the body, in particular the brain, needs salt in order to function. Its vital, everything I have ever read about people having allergic reactions after eating salt has been to check every ingrediant, as often there are anti-clump agents derived from corn and the like which are likely causing the reactions.
His eyes must be giving him trouble as well, as your tears are a naturaly produced saline sulotion. Salt is in the blood, in your brain and in your body all over.
person Jane
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If the Detention archive ever comes back online, I think I'll have to say I prefer that version, if only because it's complete.
person jess
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like how close harry and sev are

stupid bastereds beating draco

and what was up with the faters letting their sons be tourtured insane? that is so messed up
so did snape lose voldies trust?
person Chys
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good so far!
person Manda
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope you update this is really good
person Aisling
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh im luving this more soon cya xx
person Newtype
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter, the plot thickens. . nicly. Bring it to a boil and let it simmer for a chapter or two and you got yourself agreat stroy!
person Demon
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, it\'s amazing and thank you for answering the questions ^^
person Hambares
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When you say that your done, you mean with the story right? Not writing in general? I love your fics!

Can\'t wait to read what Voldemort is planning. Harry and Severus wil really have to be vigilant!
person Night Shade
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chappy, lookin\' forward to the next ^.^

~Night Shade