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by tas

person Zanris
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love you fic! It's sooo cute! and cuddley! with lots of "plot tails" that I'm sure will lead to a very intrigueing climax...Okay, that sounds wrong but I couldn't think of another way of wording that. Anyway, I love authors that update. And you gave us 2!! chapters!!! You're a great author! One thing I felt was a little off was the way that Severus sortof appeared in the story suddenly without much explanation as to how they came to not hate eachother. Don't let that discourage you though. It's a hard thing to write and the fic is doing just fine without it! Great job! Update soon. ~*~
person Zanris
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I should have read all of your comments before writing my review. So this is the part I forgot to include before. GOD DAMNIT another great fic is ending soon!!!! Three more chapters? Hope you can soundly conclude that soon. Good luck! Make us Snarry shippers proud!!
person yoblossom
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
modlie-wart is a bastard. when is he gonna die?
person Ansku
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely :) I hope you'll update soon.
person Demon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter looking forward to the next one
person Demon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this and I look forward to the next chapter I love this story and it is easily one of my most favourites to read
person Newtype
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet aditions Tas! I liked the arangment of teasing adn pet name intros as well as the fact that Draco's owl dose nto like Severus, the visit by Dudley was nice aws well. I look forward to more!
person Hambares
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for updating! Yippy! My condolences to you for working retail. Definately no free time at Christmas ( lucky enough to get a day off!). Harry and Severus are sure getting to know each other over these last few chapters. Makes for lovely reading! I'm looking forward to what Voldemort has in store for them.
person Mandy
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved this story
person Jane
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read it at 'Detention' but this edition seems to be somewhat differently plotted than that copy. I haven't decided which one I like better yet.