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I resently saw this story on the silver snitch, and I was just a little curious as to why it has more chapters on this site.
Oh well. I praise the great YAOI story!!! Great story!!!! Have Fun!!!Love-Ya. Bye.

that was one hot story!!!more please???

Very good


Kat

I'm relatively new to HP/SS ship but, nonetheless, I think this is one of those I like most.
Even because I think it is particulary difficult to not fall in the ridiculous or to give in to excesses when you write strories with such particular features: Lucius in the good side, Harry as a magical creature, ecc.
Often they become just hideous parody of a story.
Yours instead keeps having a good plot, lot of smut and lot of suspence.

So, does Voldemort knows all about the Vanteera?
Was he the one to make someone put the sail on the potion?

Why did the light of the wand hurt Harry?
Didn't you said that a normal wand light wouldn't hurt him, just a very strong one?

Keep feeding me with your story!!!!

So Far so good. Can't wait to see where you take it.

DETENTION is gone for good sadly...i love the story

brilliant story, can't wait to read the next chapter
thx for writing

Great chapter, i absolutely loved it!!
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!

I am so totally in love with this story... regarding salt... you may make mention of the fact that his body creates the needed salts from other minerals he obtains through the foods he eats... and that the amount is so small that it does not effect him, but the concentrated salt fond in sea water... or in most foods is what causes the allergic reaction. I do think you should consider creating some sort of sheild to protect him during battle... since the war could be lost by simply conjuring sea water and dousing Harry with it during a duel... Whatever you decide, I sincerely hope that you will be posting again soon!

I just thought of something... what happens when Harry comes into contact with Severus' bodily fluids? Male ejaculate, blood, tears, sweat... all of which he can be expected to encounter at one time or another... all have a measurable amount of salt in them... and even if he is protected from harm because Sev is his mate... what about his other family members? Perhaps you should have something happen where Harry encounters some salty fluids of someone other than Sev... and that could be the inspiration to create a charmed piece of jewelery or a potion or something that would protect harry... just a thought.