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by tas

person JJ
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOooooooo!!!!
It ended.
So far, you have a unique plot line. Oh, not the magical creature, although I\'m sure I\'ll enjoy it, but that Dudley is now nicer and can do magic. I can\'t wait for more.
person fragonknight01
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I should like to read more.
person Hambares
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is updated here too! You\'ve made my day Tas! Thanx!

I am glad Dudley is being friendly to Harry. I get the feeling Harry will need all the help he can get. I don\'t want to see Petunia abused though. You\'ve made me very sympathetic to her and Dudley\'s dilemna. More please!
person antipyro
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why haven\'t I read anything else like this before?????? Fantastic!!!!!!!

I\'m puzzled why Poppy couldn\'t detect any early changes in Harry, she\'s usually sooooo thorough.

Book 6, yes, that one, indicates Dudley\'s latent abilities to do magic. Good work in picking that up and using it as a friendly thing. Could you imagine Dudley being his vindictive self with magic????? Your story makes a lot more sense. ....and who is this other male friend of Dudley\'s????? Is Dudders gay???? Vernon will pop a blood vessel - lmao! if he ever finds out.

I really like the protection Dudley gives to his mom over Vernon. I hope you give it to Vernon in this story, sweet revenge!

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