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by tas

schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O I\'m in literal shock! Your use of description and phrasing is outstanding! I\'m very new to the site and I\'d really love to keep up with this particular work of liguistic art (story)! If you could help me in anyway to figure out how to keep up with updates on this \"story\", I would very much like to know.. And I must say this.. Your skills as a writer are spectacular.. I hope I can write great slash like you one day.. ^^ Well I must cut this short now.. I hope to hear from you.. Ta\' ta\'.
person Neko Miu
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad... I hope you update soon I really wwant to know what happens next
person War-chan
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE when you get to the lemon PLEASE make Harry seme and Severus uke!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!!?!?! Over all this is so far a great fic!!!!! ^_^
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Hope to see the rest soon!
person tessa3
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that\'s a shitty way to end up backat Hogwarts but.. anyhoo... kije the story.. i really do *nodding*
person mel
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story i was wonderin if you caould please email me when u up date so that i know that there is a new chappy
thanks
mel
person shadow
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you there\'s no rape here. Finally a storyline with the abuse theme don\'t have rape. It\'s good. It\'s cool to describe how harry view severus when he was checking him out. hahaha. vise and versa.
person Azure
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well i must say this is a bloody good story^^ lol liked this most recent chapter...its getting interesting
person Calanor
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH YES!!! not for the Harry torture.. but he\'s rescued!!!!

Vernon so needs to die.. or tortured or something!! and now Draco feels bad for not looking at his book sooner!!!

and what was Bela doing with it??? More please soon!!!
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor harry really getting the short end of the stick in that last chapter. Though it will be fun to read what else has changed or inhanced about him, I love creature fics and this one looks like alot of fun! Can\'t wait for severus to get a good look at him and see what kind of reaction we\'ll get!