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for My Fallen Angel

by crimsonvipera

person RC
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I must say that I really LOVE your fic, but please...don't take so much time to update?!
person The w00t Girl
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter and greatly needed, plus I love the stunned Severus. <3

Although the only error I found was
person Hambares
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you really have toend the chapter there? It was such a sweet chapter! And SEverus hasn't fought this yet. I'm so happy! What is in store for the boys next?
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait for the next chapter.
person jasminelove
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAH! Snape is soo mean. Poor Harry. He sounds like he's breaking. That Miss Campbell is a bitch. Why is Snape so polite and mannerism towards her?!?!?!!?
Love your story. The idea is great!! Update soon please!!!
person absinthe
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEK!!!! What is it with the writers on these pages grabbing their readers by the ankles and dangling them off cliffs!!!! NO MORE CLIFFIES!!! I propose a petition to BAN THE CLIFF HANGER! lol. Please don't keep us waiting too long for an update.
person ranni
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack you can't just leave it there... I wanna know what happens!
person Mad as a hatter, not as a hare
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait, wait, wait. Stop the presses. Did you REALLY just asterick out the word bitch in an NC-17 story?!
person Snowy
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far can't wait to see an update!
person Leenah
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say I was greatly entertained when Narcissa asked Harry to chew his soup slowly :) No really, I like this story very much, and I am looking very much forward to read more. Please update soon.