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for Her Invisible Cross.

by OnlyInThisLight

person DRedSand
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If it was in her first year you could have made lockhart the bad guy, hell a faulty memory charm could be part of the reason she's so loopy
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, I agree, her fear is almost tangible...
person Maggie(Magnam)
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn Katelyn, that was freakin\' intense. Very well done, and tasteful (given the circumstances)
damn, man...I feel sick
person Weird Sister
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really breathtaking story. The Fear of Loona is almost touchable, without laying it too thick on it. Just plain beauty this story.
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic.....I always like a good bit of darkness and this is perfection!
person tdk
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very good plot, short but good. You should make this into a series, it\'s such a well written story. And I love any story that features Luna.
person Jane
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was so sad!

Your story is very well written, and it touched me deeply.
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sad, but definitely original and well written