AFF Fiction Portal
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the poem/song. It is well written and feels personal. The only thing I had trouble with was understanding the ending, but otherwise this was a very nice piece.
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sad. Very emotional and intense.
person jess
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intresting
person TyRisha
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed that. it was different, both in the sense of perspective and the way you wrote it. even at the end i wasn\'t completely clear who was who at all points.
person Aisling
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no.. take it back! take it back!! luved it cya xx