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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Post damnit. Post. Why do all my favorit authors quit half way into a story? WHy?
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really do enjoy this story. It is just about the only D/s one that I have read where it seems credible. Very well done.
The only thing that bothers me is that in the beginning Severus has this sudden rush of doubt about Harry, worrying about them switching roles or Harry dominating him, when in the subsequent chapters Harry's character is explained by Severus, and on top of that, he also supposedly knows that Harry sees him as his mate. I can understand why unfamiliar circumstances would make him uncertain, but the inconsistancy bothers me.
Well written, and an intriguing concept. Please continue.
The only thing that bothers me is that in the beginning Severus has this sudden rush of doubt about Harry, worrying about them switching roles or Harry dominating him, when in the subsequent chapters Harry's character is explained by Severus, and on top of that, he also supposedly knows that Harry sees him as his mate. I can understand why unfamiliar circumstances would make him uncertain, but the inconsistancy bothers me.
Well written, and an intriguing concept. Please continue.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! I have just re-read it and it is still enthralling, but where is the next chapter? Will you hold us in suspense??
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story so far and can't wait to see more of it. I think You have done a really good job with it.
K.
K.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. This is good stuff. I like that the constant role reversal that Snape and Harry go through is acually believable. Nice attention to charcter. It adds a lot to the story. Can't wait to see where this goes, it has a lot of potential.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou so much for giving me such an enjoyable story. It's really unique and absorbing since you've written it skillfully to make sure it's actually believeable. I love this story and I eagerly await the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou so much for giving me such an enjoyable story. It's really unique and absorbing since you've written it skillfully to make sure it's actually believeable. I love this story and I eagerly await the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is a delight. I lost sleep reading it all in one night and now despereate for more.
I started reading it because I craved for bdsm thing. However, I got more than that. The dark side looks good and smart suddenly, but still ruthless. You do a good job on Voldemort, Lucius, Ginny, Severus and, of course, Harry. I love their dynamic. I love what a good job Severus does as a dom. I also love the funny part that make me laughing like mad even though it seems so simple and unimtentional, like when Harry answered that he had grrek food all the time.
All in all, your story is terrific. You're a very good writer. And I'm in need for more :)
I started reading it because I craved for bdsm thing. However, I got more than that. The dark side looks good and smart suddenly, but still ruthless. You do a good job on Voldemort, Lucius, Ginny, Severus and, of course, Harry. I love their dynamic. I love what a good job Severus does as a dom. I also love the funny part that make me laughing like mad even though it seems so simple and unimtentional, like when Harry answered that he had grrek food all the time.
All in all, your story is terrific. You're a very good writer. And I'm in need for more :)
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um will you get this one up to speed with the one of fanfiction .net