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Very nice! I love Dark!Harry fics, especially ones that put him sub to Severus. *Grins* But I hope the reasons for him turning dark will come into light in future chapters. Here\'s hoping! Keep writing, please, I think you\'ve got a good story going!

This is terrific stuff! I can\'t imagine that Severus will be Dom, but with Harry giving him some stature, like tons of it, maybe it\'s better that way.

I can\'t help thinking that this is the way the Light figured to get Severus out of Voldemort\'s clutches and back to the good side without pissing off Voldemort. I wonder if Harry heard the long incantation to remove the dark mark. What a bargaining chip!!!!!

So, I\'m wondering what bad-ass thing Harry will have to do to convince all the not quite converted Deatheaters, read that Lucius, that he\'s actually a bad guy - sorta, I think.

Ooooo, squeeming here, anticipating how you\'re going to do all this and make this story get even better.

Awesome plot line and very well written!

Hi,
there I told you you could post it at aff.net, and its already here! Lucky me! I like that you made it dom!Severus, it will be very interesting to read! You might want to look about the second chapter, though, there are parts missing. (Harry and Voldemort speaking), which makes it a bit confusing. I suppose aff.nets editor meddled with your text?
Continue soon!
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHA (in the famous words of SCAR off the Lion King) BE PREPARED!!!!!! looking good looking good.. can\'t wait till the next chappie.. tata

Spunky! I love me some powerful in command Harry!

The structure of this chapter was immensely confusing. It would do a lot of good were you to re-edit it.

The first couple of chapters really have me hooked. I was glad to see your AN explaining the D/s relationship because, like Voldemort in this chapter, I have trouble seeing Sev as a submissive. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Bit short to say anything already. But what concerns me: you have no warning up for non-con. When I see Ds I automatically assume it\'s consensual as all practices labelled BDSM. So - will this be a consensual dom-sub arrangement you\'ll be writing about? And who will take on which role?
The last is more of a personal interest to me since I simply can\'t imagine Snape being willingly (! - rape. mindcontrol and coercion are naturally different matters) subservient to ANYone - but most especially not Potter jun! To me such a constellation has the realism and in-character-feeling of Voldemort and Longbottom happily joining forces to establish a nature reservation for endangered plants and snakes. So it would not be something I\'d enjoy reading due to different personal interests and character views ^_~

Damn, you\'re good. I started to laugh maniacally by the beginning of the second chapter.

Holy Shit!!!! I can see the heat waves already, bouncing off the cold stone floor and through the hearts of every deatheater!

This is hot stuff and yes, you should definately continue. I want to know sooooo much about your story; will Voldemort know that Harry and Severus are lovers - and will he stand in the way? - probably not, but he won\'t like it, I\'m sure; How will Lucius \'play\' in this story or is he the sub? (tee hee); Is Harry really on the Dark side? or playing a part in the Light\'s ultimate defeat of Voldemort; what keen and kinky sex scenes can we expect? Oh, please say lots...

HOT! HOT! HOT! Please, more, soon.