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by Vingilot

person Nightwing
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, i\'m really enjoying your story!
Usually i don\'t read stories with Harry allying with Voldie, but your story is very unique. Especially with the twist being submissive to Sev. Can\'t wait for more.
Chow for now...
person myniephoenix
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing..... yet another wonderful chapter... i am looking forward to a good sev and harry chapter tho..
person deb
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brillant, i would love a flash back to the first time he took harry that would be nice likes, the very first time, as his master, would also love another scene when they were in the rooms thereselves from what his first time was like and what he was like then. for instance Snape would have had to show him how to obviously for his first time and what he is like now, it will be nice to see, update soon, also update skin deep. missing it already update them both soon goodbye
person deb
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
also cant wait to see Dumbldore\'s face when he finds out about there relationship. maybe have him try to force them to break up. but cant snape shows Dumbledore the contract that cant be broken, yea! lol maybe have him try and give him a potion maybe love potion ? discreatly of course anyway him always being around the potions master knew that somthing was wrong switched the potion around and they then find themselves in love with Ginny Weasley, of course harry keeps switching them lol. when the potions stop the person who had fell for ginny realises what he had been doing and had been drugged accusess ginny! lol yea ! whooo update soon
person Aisling
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay more now soon please!!
person myniephoenix
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
harry needs to get laid!!!!!!!!!!! :)

this story is great.. update soon..
person firewitch
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is bloody brillant i hope you update soon i am looking forward to see where this story is going
person fragonknight01
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite a good chapter.
person momoko
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. :) I\'m glad you decided to post it here as well, that way we can continue to read it if it gets deleted on the fanfiction site. :)