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for The Black Prince

by Vingilot

person Kit
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story!!! Be sure to update soon!
person acr
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this type of Dark! Harry story. I don\'t like suddenly evil harry, but more cold, thoughtful harry. BTW, did some of your text get deleted?
The Prince turned to Lord Voldemort. he hissed softly.



he said, grinning evilly.

Seems to be a gap?
person Adia
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW- I LOVE Your story! I have been checking everyday for updates. I have been reading Harry/Severus for a long time and this is the best story I\'ve seen in a long while.

Thank you! Thank you!

Adia
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha dorian black

very clever
person Demon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great and I know what you mean with ranking abuse all of it is something what shouldn\'t be done and it\'s all as bad as anything else
person +deb/
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey hope too see order members children trying to get harry to go out with them, you know like Ginny and Cho love potions would be cool too, hm... yes that would although it would not work harry is after all a submittive to SEverus and will know the potions and all that update soon please great stroy bye
person jess
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice

i like the thing with the kidnap of harry potter
person icestar
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice.

The personas harry has are interesting, completely seperated... maybe potter has issues with the malfoys, but the black prince doesnt...

anyways, *thumbs up*
person Mistress Vamp
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. Please update again soon, ok? I need to know what is going to happen next! ::MV::
person Aisling
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh great chapter.... i agree with ur basis of neglect/abuse... it wud be worse to be hated and ignored than to be punished... at least when being punished u no others no u exist!