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for The Black Prince

by Vingilot

schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once more a very nice part. :D

Just one thing though, the part about who\'s going to be the new headmaster and such, is that said by Voldemort or Harry?

If it\'s Voldemort, then it would have been better if you had mentioned that. Seeing as how the question had been asked to the Prince/Harry. If it was Harry, then why were the surprised when he spoke up afterwards? :)

Apart from that it\'s really nice and I absolutely enjoy reading it. :D
person jess
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like rumes and the other two new recruits

the meeting with the inner circle went well
person as
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person wiccan-witch88
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, please update soon
person Nightwing
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, good chapter. Can\'t wait for more, chow!
person jess
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice with the rumors i hate dumbledor he\'s an itotic bastered
yay for harry\'s mind
person momoko
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Ree
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds enthusiastically.* Damn, you write such a good story, you\'ve got me wanting to join the Dark side now. *Laughs* I think the story you\'re weaving is absolutely brilliant, and I hope that you continue to update it. *Smirks* It would be interesting to see whom Dorian can win over from Harry Potter\'s former life. I\'d rather like to see Ginny and Remus as a part of his life, since they were mentioned previously. But that\'s really up to you. Keep writing, and what an amazing story!
person Aisling
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh more soon please?:D i wonder how the death eaters will take the news? LOL
person Rachel
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, a new chapter, yes, yes! And a very good one too (well... too short, just one : ( , not fast enough for the crazy compulsive read that I am... yes, I\'m being a prat, sorry)

Just one thing, I think there is a paragraph missing right after Lucius\' report (before Ava\'s and Cassandra\'s) and from that point on the whole chapter is in italic, maybe one of your... gods, what is the name of it? editing marks? Whatever, I think the problem might be one of them - probably the one where LV speaks in parseltongue to HP. I hope you don\'t mind me pointing it out.

Well, anyway, love your fic, please up date.