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for The Black Prince

by Vingilot

person TyRisha
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
words cannot describe how much i love this fic. he\'s such a perfect leader and such a good bottom too. i never could see Severus as a submissive, and he\'s not really that in the ranks of the Death Eaters, so it all works out. keep going
person Aisling
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D :D oooh yay!! more soon please... :D cya xx poor Draco tho LOL :P
person Wizzel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great chapter!
person chibifae
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! i love dark Harry and this is a wonderful example. please update soon. excellent writing and i love the black prince-dorian black thing.
person Jadzia
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot begin to properly express how much I am enjoying this story. It\'s a rare gift, to be able to properly describe battle plans and long reaching societal changes. You do it very well. I look forward to seeing more of the Prince\'s plans for the Wizarding world.

You\'ve also done very well making the D/s role believable, and in meshing their public and private roles. Good show, all \'round :)
person Moppit
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story. I started with reading Skin Deep before finding this one. Just thought you would like to know however that in chapter 7 you refer to Harry/Dorian as Tallis when talking about the desires of an incubi. The joys of having more than one story in progress.
person lazy cat
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this new story you made up but i think youre confusing it with the other one you wrote tallis when you should have said harry somewhere in chap 7 near the beggining....
apart from that great work i like the fact that harry is a creature it really adds to his charm in my opinion
keep up that great work
person Crsty
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...what can I say?...This story is bloodly Awsome!!!!!!! Please up date soon. ^_^
person Missi
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEE* *pants heavily, mumbling \"I\'ve gotta quit smoking\"* Thanks for this amazing fic, OMG I so love it!! I can\'t wait to see where it goes next, and what blond moments Draco still has to come!!
person proftlb
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as always, but you\'ve got a small slip-up. You at one point refer to Harry/Dorian as Tallis. Minor issue, but you may have confused people who aren\'t also reading Skin Deep.