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Heyla, I would love to say what a wonderful job you\'ve been doing. I really don\'t mind the time between updates because the work you\'ve put into your fic shows, it\'s well thought out and clear and consise and your characters are pretty close to canon considering the situation you\'ve put them in. Lovely work! Also, I\'d like to suggest a sports bar type of pub/resturant, it\'s something that would attract older kids and young adults. They would be interested in sports and the ambance would be good for someplace for them to hang out.

hummm Sounds like everyone goes to get butterbear and not much else, so someplace to eat would be good! Maybe an american food restaurant that would attract a younger target audience so harrydorian would have a chance to \"corrupt\" the youth. I love the relationship you created for sev/harry especially keeping it a secret from all the other peoples since its fun hearing them speculate on what the hell happens behind closed doors (giggleing).

Keep up the good work I\'m sure whatever store shop you use will be great!

how about a jokeshop. then you could inclued the twins maybe

Hey! I think I might have reviewed once or twice but my internet\'s been down for days and you update really quickly (which is a very, very good thing by the way). Anyways I have an idea for your shop. You can have a bookstore/pub-restaurant/supplies shop. I\'ve seen people start these and teenages spend a lot of time there (I am a teenager so I should know lol). People can buy things they like- qudditch- you got your active people, you\'ve got your books, there\'s your brainy people, and they want to stay there because its got food and drink *and* you don\'t have to be quite like you have to in a library. No to mention if you have supplies they need for school: potion stuff, gloves and what-not for herbology (I planned on starting something like it around my town {not magical stuff obviously} so if your wondering why its so thought out there you have it).

Anyways this is a really, really great story. I love it so much. I hop on every day after school to see if you\'ve updated yet and am so happy when you do and so disappointed that you don\'t. Not that I\'m disappointed for long as you *do* update very fast.

I do have one question: What does they\'re room look like? Or Voldemort\'s hideout. If you\'ve already said and I just didn\'t pay enough attention go ahead and yell at me.

Happy Writings

This is a great story!! For the shop/pub idea I was thinking along the lines of maybe a bit of both. A place that sells food & such but also has a bit of like a \'gift shop\' that sells a variety of things. Or kind of like a \'sports bar\' theme where they sell food but have like Quiditch stuff hanging on the walls... you know little flags, pics, broom sticks. Maybe some pic & stuff from when quitditch first started... how the snitch came to be in the game.... things like that.... the first model of broom used in quiditch... some quiditch trivia. Of course it would have to have good food so it would draw in those students that aren\'t that big of quiditch fans. Maybe the place could have more then one theme like one area be quiditch another be I dunno magical creatures? Or have it relate to the subjects at the school... little known facts that way it would be more of a reason that it was opened in Hogsmeade instead of Diagon Alley. Or little known facts about the magical world.... that way it would kind of start the \"education\" they would talking about. Just some ideas hope I didn\'t confuse you.

As always, great work!! I love this story!

Hmmm... What kind of shop? Something kids, mudbloods, half-bloods and purebloods alike would enjoy... There may be a select audience desired, but the shop would have to attract all to prevent drawing attention, and it must encourage lingering... An arcade? A trendy clothiers? A coffee house or ice cream parlor (but most of the time they\'re in school, it\'s cold)? Got it! A shop that specializes in music, wizard or muggle convert to wizard. Posters and related books and such, could work their way in, too. That would provide a medium for getting the msg. out wide scale, and yet only visable to certain eyes... Subliminal stuff... Quidditch would be great, but it is too much like Harry. Dumbledore would watch it, as it would be of interest to Harry. In fact, it would be of interest to most guys, but only a few girls, and Voldie seems to run short on female soldiers. Any way, that\'s my two cents worth.

Keep up the great work!

imthiking like a cafe into a shop/bookstore or store withthings forall occasions or something of the sort but the cafe has to be inside

Hi!

Although i am one of those persons who very rarely get their lazy ass up to review, I now do so.
Your story is really good, I find Harry as a *dark* leader *very* fascinating! And in a Dom/sub relationship with hot Sevvie too, mmh, yummie, too much to resist!!
You describe the change between \"The Black Prince\" and \"Harry, Severus\' pet\" so good, it

hey, well i just want to say that i read up to the 5th (i think) chapter, but i cant read anymore...its not that i dont like it, cuz i do love it, the idea of it is great, but i cant read fics where Harrys name is changed...this isnt the first time that ive stoped cuz of it though, this really good one that i loved, after reading it for a year( on the 26 chapter) she changed Harrys name and i tryed to read more but i couldnt...im really sorry *hugs* this story is great, and i hope you end up finishing it :)

WOW this story is really shaping up well! um... more sex please!
don\'t get me wrong- I love your story! it\'s just that I didn\'t even get turned on reading this (very well written) chapter.

-Adia