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Great fic. Dark Harry .... yummmm! For the shop/restaurant ... if it\'s to attract younger kids and even teens ... a fast food place (like the M place) is normally packed with them... or some sort of cafe or gaming place. Some muggle like chain store would be a great cover and keep Bumblebore (not a typo ;p) off there backs. Please update soon!

wow, im still getting used to the new layout LOL... im overwhelmed!! But anyway...

... uh, a pub? sorta like the Three Broomsticks, but classier, and serving food and sodas too, so the younger ones can go as well. u no u get cafes? and they serve alcohol? sort of like that place, and all the waitresses/waiters can be death eaters, and the bartender can do that thing when they see a depressed person, the offer a light(lighter) and then the depressed person talks about their problems... thats a good way for people to open up and then if it was Dorian he could talk them over to Voldemort.....?? ive gone on too long... cya now more soon xxx

First I\'d like to say I\'m enjoying your story. I haven\'t run across another quite like it and I check for updates every night. Second ideas for a shop. How about a bookstore with a nice comfy cafe area where patrons can read and enjoy something to eat and drink? They could even have some copies of magazines, newspapers and a variety of books available to read on the spot for those who might be a bit tight financially. I would think that they could spell such items to be impervious to food and drink stains. If they made sure that there were a variety of items available to read such as Quidditch books and magazines, things geared towards girls who are into fashion etc and anything else they can think of it could be quite a pull for students. Add books, magazines and maybe even book club and or debate nights geared towards aduldts and they could get quite a cross section. Shoot having bookclubs and or debate times for different ages and you could introduce ideas to students. On this they would have to be careful not to arouse suspicion of course but that should be doable. Any debate must have both sides presented to be balanced so even if only the \"good\" side seems to win the full set of ideas get presented.

Well I\'ll head out now, looking forward to more.

Ice Cream Shop, or maybe just something called, like, Dorian\'s Desserts, where he has candies and cookies and cakes and ice cream and anything else you could imagine, but there are tables and coffee and stuff, so it has a Starbucks feel. Sell sandwiches or something, too, and the older students could go down there everyday to do homework and take younger sibs on weekends or something. Maybe have bookcases everywhere for reference or enjoyment and have him helping students with their homework, getting to know them......I\'m getting WAY too into this, I\'m sorry. You did ask, though. Thanks for this amazing chapter, I can\'t wait for the next one!!

I really like your story, it is very interesting. I think that maybe instead of a restaurant or shop that maybe more of a club or a cross between a pub a club and a resaurant would be a good idea. That way Dorian could mingle with people as they drink, eat, and dance. I think that this would be a good thing because there are already pubs and teashops there so maybe an area where they can have those things but also dance would be good and they wouldn\'t have to worry as much about competition because it would be something totally different. It would also draw a lot of different types of people, not just students, and if it gets really well known, people from other areas then Hogsmeade and Hogwarts might come. Not to mention that people usually linger quite a long time in places like that.

good chapter, an ice cream parlor with games, maybe some muggle games that work with magic?, bye

Hello!
I love this chapter (=>I LOVE THE STORY in globality)
Maybe Dorian open a coffee? Something more friendly than Ms Puddifoot. (this is the right name?)
The students can sit down in marrowies armchairs? -Like the central perk coffee in friends-
I hope you understand me... (I\'m french)
Update soon!

Uld Ases

if you\'re gonna pull in the students... a place where they can study... as well as eat... hip enough to draw in the kids and young adults... and older ones... maybe even a deli and maybe in the evening time... wine and what not.. for the older ones

Great as always!
I want to know more about Remus and Sirius... and how did he know about Harry-Dorian true parentage
And as for the shop... How about a coffie shop which is also a bookshop or poetryclub...^_^
Anyway... Keep it up!!

UPDATE SOON

Syl

hello
ont the store in hogs meed i think the reasturant idea has merit. i was thinking maybe mugglefie the idea and have a small cinema with fast food / malt shop combination. i looove the story so far.