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for The Black Prince

by Vingilot

person Missi
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy meeting-table sex! That\'s one of my fav types of sex! I loved the line,

\"He knew that his Master would be very disappointed in him if he came without permission and he definitely did not have permission to orgasm during a meeting of the elite Death Eaters.\"

That was my favorite line, it just struck me as not only very true but very amusing. I giggled and everything. I love this fic, and this chapter was amazing. Thanks so much for writing it!
person Hambares
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus is such a tease. Giving Harry an expanding plug.
person SuryaPrakash
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing an adult version of this story. I love Dark!Harry stories, and this one is such an powerful mix of Dark Lord and sub! I love Serverus\' part, having to change character in public and private. He\'s so good for Harry!
person Lord Localfreak
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is very cool and very well written. I confess the amout Harry cried in a few chapters made me worry about the line between \'submissive\' and \'wuss\' but you always endeavour to reiterate the consensual nature of a D/S relationship.

person Missi
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Dorian and his multiple personalities! Can\'t wait to see him attend a meeting nude! Thanks for this awesome update (actually, 2-it\'s been a bit since I\'ve read). I can\'t wait for more!
person dragonmhs
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again I absolutely love this story. It is coming along great; I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Just an FYI the conversation between Voldie and Harry was confusing. Typically authors use ~~ instead of \" to indicate the speaking of that language or they put in in italics using the following without spaces < i > italics < / i >. Just a suggestion. Love it!
person jess
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun i like it
person antipyro
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter on the wearing of clothes and what job Harry should establish!

Loved the Lucius line, ....he\'ll be nude?..... LOL

Taking on chapter 10 now.

Keep it coming.
person momoko
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Claudia
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just found this fic and I love it! I can\'t wait for the next update!