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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it has a good start. I hope you continue this. Draco\'s internal monologue was pretty funny as well. Keep up the good work and I am awaiting Chap.2
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well to be honest i only got a vague idea of the plot from that so is harry gonna help him back to a human, can he talk so there\'s communication or is it one of those where he has to act within cat abilities and learn more about others? Like the humor though and his snotty attitude is fun. maybe harry could be an animagus too. a cat maybe so they could go spy on people together or something. please no beastiality. so gross please no. hope this helped with feedback....
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 3! He\'s in their dorm room. So what happens next? Why did Draco still at Ron\'s voice? Where\'s Harry?
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 2! What kind of cat? What does he look like? Who finds him?
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There really isn\'t much there. It really is much too short. It does, however, have a fun precept and could conceivably be a good humor story.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like it would make a great story, poor lil draco... you should definately go with it.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! he\'s a cat! But who\'s cat would he be now i wonder hmmm? I\'m lovin the begining! Keep it up!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Generally, for someone to say whether they like a story or not, they\'d need to read a little bit more. But I think your story definitely has potential! It\'s really funny so far. And Malfoy\'s definitely really in-character- which I absolutely love! Hope you post up chap 2 quickly!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One more note- he\'s a cat? hehehe! So adorable. Would have been more adorable if he was stuck as the trademark white ferret. ^_^ Is Harry going to find him and make Draky-poo his pet?
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start to this! Please continue.