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for The Little Pet

by Draconix

person Draeconin
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very amusing. Looking forward to reading more.
person bekki
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol kool!!!!

o you so need to update soon!

i like the winging harry, o puhleeeaaaase update soon!
person mysticneko
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know why he wanted to transmute into a dragon... and how he changes back! :(
Review soon please!

PS: Could you email me when you update? Thanks!
person sbkar
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Invest in a a beta-reader/editor. They will catch things that don\'t make sense, such as: \"Still analyzing, one coffin by each bed, a night table too and a window.\" I\'m supposing you meant \"one trunk\" instead of a \"coffin\"? There are numerous misspellings and some poor formatting.

You want your best to show up on-line, thus, a beta would help immensely.
person roxierose13
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! Harry found him and now what\'s going to happen...will he be turned back and they get together??? Hmm...continue soon!
person Amessis
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great job! Can\'t wait for more.
person Reyn
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! You need longer chapters!!
person LittleNeji
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write soon more^^ the story reminds me a little of my story, just that Harry is the cat and not Draco *laughs* it\'s cool!! I like the way you write Draco\'s thoughts, it\'s so funny^^ update soon...
person avihenda
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute idea. litle draco got lost in grifindor tower lol.
looking forward to more chapters.
person Mia
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really funny! More please.