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August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I almost chose not to read this because it was obviously unfinished. Now, I'm in two minds. I've enjoyed it very much which makes me happy that I decided to read it. At the same time, I'm pissed that it's unfinished. I sometimes wish authors would remove their unfinished work when they decide to stop writing. However, that would mean we'd miss out on some pretty good stuff. Still, it's like bringing a person to the edge of an orgasm & then walking away! Very frustrating!
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
me likey, not my normal fic, and I like it, good job.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is a great story. When are you going to update? I hate suspense!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I can't wait to see what happenes!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what trick? ....i had been hoping harry would end up with snape...oh well....
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8: if i were harry i wouldn't have a relationship further then friendship with ginny. she should have stayed a virgin if she wanted harry. he's a virgin and she's not and she's slept with snape countless times even while draco watched! that's past exceptable.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW THE FUCK DID GINNY END UP TEAM CAPTAIN???? IT GOES TO THE OLDEST MEMBER WHICH IS HARRY!!!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wouldn't like ginny after she slept with snape if i were harry. if he lost his virginity , with someone besides ginny, then i might feel better. but right now i feel he got the short end of the stick.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pant, pant, pant, pant.
You DO know how to write a love scene!!!!
That was just . . perfect.
Now, about Lucius. Was he upset because the bonding ribbon with Draco was one of love and not just a toy as a Death Eater would understand? And how did Draco appear at the top of the stairs? Did Ginny call him, as Snape implied, to protect her and Harry? And was Snape looking with lust because three very attractive, sex crazy teens were at the top of the stairs or because Draco was? Is Snape also interested in Harry, or just the possibility of a foursome? And I'm still wondering why Snape has made no move to claim what may be the only child he may ever have. Will Harry ever forgive him, as he has forgiven Ginny for being with Snape before him? Inquiring minds want to know. Aaaawwww hell, I want to know. I'll settle for finding out when you write more story! After all, it's the fun way to find out.
You DO know how to write a love scene!!!!
That was just . . perfect.
Now, about Lucius. Was he upset because the bonding ribbon with Draco was one of love and not just a toy as a Death Eater would understand? And how did Draco appear at the top of the stairs? Did Ginny call him, as Snape implied, to protect her and Harry? And was Snape looking with lust because three very attractive, sex crazy teens were at the top of the stairs or because Draco was? Is Snape also interested in Harry, or just the possibility of a foursome? And I'm still wondering why Snape has made no move to claim what may be the only child he may ever have. Will Harry ever forgive him, as he has forgiven Ginny for being with Snape before him? Inquiring minds want to know. Aaaawwww hell, I want to know. I'll settle for finding out when you write more story! After all, it's the fun way to find out.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Over seven thousand hits on your story!!!! Why are there not more reviews? I'm grateful that you are sharing your story and impressed with your writing of this fan fiction. Please keep it up.