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for Lascivus Wanton

by alientheet

person cdkobasiuk
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy they are caught. This should be good.

cdk
person momoko
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
person NightShade
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot. And when they found one another you HAD TO let them meet Dumbledore? You are evil (smile)! Wonderful.
person Danielle
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. Please keep up the good work.
person Saske\'s iris
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil is an understatement, happy I am back for more and am waiting for an update, humm what will they tell the old man...
person hera
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay. you updatd. you are the best. this fic is bril and this chappie is sooooooooooo sweet. please give me more slashy goodness soon!
person NightShade
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story more with each new chapter... I love your hurted and hurting Snape and Harry seeking true about his father and his own emotions... It\'s excellent.
person Neko Miu
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update sometime in the future close to now!! I love your story!! ^ - ^
person antipyro
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that all that indecisiveness is over, we can get down to the real reason you\'re writing this.

Excellent chapter and well written, the story line still grabs me.

I did notice that twice you used the word \'seen\' when you should have used \'saw\'. Minor little grammar thing, it won\'t stop me from reading more.

Soon, please?
person Nightwing
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving your story, the dangerous relationship Harry and Snape have i hope will develop. Woah... the rape was intense... Not sure i could or couldn\'t imagine James doing that, i\'ve read too many random fanfiction...
Can\'t wait for more
Chow for now!