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for Lascivus Wanton

by alientheet

person TyRisha
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, ginny wasn\'t totally out of character. i mean, she does have feelings for Harry from the very beginning and if he was to hurt her, she\'d react much the same. as for snape and harry, well, angst in its more mundane form of angry and sad drama is part of life. *shrugs* harry\'s hurt by snape, snape\'s unhappy over harry, and 2+2=4 so voila angsty Snarry. keep up the good work
person Meg
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy!!! Write more soon please please!!! It\'s so awesomely frustrating I can\'t stand it!!! This fic is great though, don\'t get me wrong..the plot is so think I love it!!! I hope everything works out okay though and I can\'t wait to read more!~ Oh wait I said that already. teehee. ^_^
person Neko Miu
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty amusing when Harry pelted Snap with a rock... update soon please!
person Meg
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I\'m so freaking happy you updated!! //HUGS!!!!! This chapter was awesome, I\'m so happy they love each other!!!!! Please make mroe and soon! I\'ll review again and again! <3
person fw
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I\'m enjoying this so much, I love how they\'re back together and how Snape accidentally told Harry he loved him! Looking forward to your next chapter
person JJ
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to say stop trying to keep everyone happy and stick to your story! But, as much as I say it, you will do what feels right to you.
Your story is interesting. Quite a triangle you have there. For once, something Dumbledore won\'t forgive Snape for. And I agree with you that Ginny is out of character. Then again, it\'s your story! Poor Harry, poor Snape. Both so screwed up! Is Voldy still undefeated? He has definitely taken a back seat to the drama of your story. I like the focus on two people searching for love and finding it at the worse possible time in their lives. I look forward to more!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH! I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING SOO QUICKLY!
This story has quickly become one of my favorites in the site!! :D
you\'ve done a GREAT job writing it!
*pats author on the back*
you\'re sitting in front of your screen in anticipation? You remind me of me!!
hehe
update real soon k?
luvs!!

person Angie/Les
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really nifty. i don\'t mind you branching out. Update soon.
person antipyro
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess it was going to happen sometime, some Het slipping in there. Only if Harry realizes that snarry is much preferred, in our most humble opinions.

When you get to it, make the snarry just as juicy, wet and sensuous as the het, then I\'ll forgive you.

Until I read that, I\'ll sit and wait for more, kinda hungry-like.
person libldyjean
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don\'t get discouraged. the tale you are telling is good. that is why people keep reading. well, i can\'t really speak (type?) for others but that is why i eagerly read each time a new LW ch. is added.