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for Lascivus Wanton

by alientheet

person En4cerMax
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is only one thing I need to know. Is Harry and Severus going to be together again? I hope this new Professor doesn\'t try to win the heart of Harry. Keep writing. This is too good.
person NightShade
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this new situation, Snape out and Harry closed in the castle, new potion teacher and Dumbledore cruel in a way... I would be nice and sweet if Dumbledore accepts them and they can stand together, but the story is more dramatic this way. Nevertheless I hope there will be happy end. Your story is better and better.
person Neko Miu
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do like your story and I really hope you update again...
person deb
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it. i want you to make Voldemort come to hogwarts, harry stands there going to let Voldemort kill him, dumbldore tries to get there in time, but he is to late, in the last minute a student stands in the way, not Ron hermione or anyone important colin Creevy or somthing, then voldi ends up having to leave Dumbldore drove him of. he takes the spell of harry, or no one jumps in the way, and the killing curse takes the stats of him and he leaves leaving everyone to die for taking his happiness from him. lol

it was only when Dumbledore was dying and Snape and harry killing voldemort to realise he was wrong to split them up for that he accepts his fate, harry isint bothered about that he has his love of his life back!
person Jennifer
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you end it there? We need another chapter.
person Jo
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great! There are a few grammatical errors but they don\'t take away from the story. I love the angst that Harry and Severus are suffering - I like the boys to suffer, so that they can have a lovely happy ending - the buildup is what gives a good story it\'s emotional tension. I also love the way you have just about everybody disapproving of the relationship, because that\'s what I reckon would happen.

Looking forward to more!
person Barbara
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad dumbledore, please reunite Severus and Harry. Update soon.
person Suzanne
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it. I hope Harry finds a way out of Hogwarts. Did they take his Invisibility Cloak? Cause when they didn\'t he can escape using a secret passage. I really love it!!! Please update soon.
person Moi
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story a lot. I didn\'t like it very much, at first. But I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Demon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW please update soon this is amazing