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for Lascivus Wanton

by alientheet

person SilverPhoenix
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im sick so this isnt gonna be long but ....update soon *puppy eyes* lol i love it :) *hugs you*
person Hambares
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Severus is definately a Slytherin! Harry knows the truth and that makes Severus nervouse, He want sto protect himself. More please!
person antipyro
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah, just leave it there why don\'tcha\'????? You\'re an evil person for doing that....

Yes, it could have been a made up memory or something distorted from the truth, but usually Severus doesn\'t lie. He already had Harry, why make him sympathetic to him too???

Love the squicked out Ron. He\'s always squicking...lol

Hermione, where would the world be with her reading. Next time it would be better if the book had some kind of suggestive name like, \"Early scientific reports of the sexual activities of Pixies - 1685-1850\". LMAO!!!

Love the story and want soooo much more of it, a lot more often, Please????!!!!!
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. I especially like the bit where Snape complimented Harry in Potions class to mess with his head. I do believe that was a first in all my fan fic reading- most excellent!
person Tamura
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s a good way to villainize James. good job. i\'m serious. James is a very viable villain, especially with what was known about how the Marauder\'s got \"along\" with Snape. Poor Sev. Poor Harry too. they both so confused. haha. they\'ll figure it out. with a few speedbumps i assume. *smirk* update again soon please.
person NightShade
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'s good to continue!! Their situation gives many possibilities and you obviously have enough ideas. I\'m looking forward to development of your story.
person Angie/Les`
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is really interesting. Please continue.
person NightShade
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written!
person Hambares
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the title! I\'d love to read more!!!
person antipyro
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this, it was fantastic - real fanfic stuff!

Yes, do continue with this, I\'m wondering if Snape will get into trouble for using the illegal potion; if Dumbledore will approve or not; if next time the unlocked door will be an issue, etc., etc., etc.

The idea that Lily\'s eyes, of penetrating green, is what Snape falls for is fairly unique. Hmmm, a wanton Snape, that\'s also different.

Love it and want more!