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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, the ending was perfect. Keep writing!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am extremely impressed, your eloquence with words is fantastic. So well structured, i felt my heartstrings pulled with the romance, a short story but a compelling one all the same!
Marvelous stuff, i hope you\'re proud of yourself, you should be!
Marvelous stuff, i hope you\'re proud of yourself, you should be!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, if not slightly sad at the beginning. I would highly recommend your story.
You are a very talented writer.
Kind Regards Louise.
You are a very talented writer.
Kind Regards Louise.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story.. very nice ending..... sad in a way but nice.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great piece of fiction, very dark but that is the way I like it.
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Remarkable, fascinating, great, awesome, dark, and lovely. These are all words that I could use to describe this story. It was so intriguing and so captivating that it just had me on the edge of my seat. The fact that you were able to wrap it all up in one chapter is amazing in itself. While we the reader are left with some questions, they are good questions. It is always good to leave the reader wanting more and that is exactly what you did. You are a marvelous writer and I hope that you write some more stories, for us the reader to enjoy.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great job on the one-shot! Most times, it is best to move on...
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed. This was excellent! It was a good read and a thoroughly thought out plot of a one shot. Kudos to you!!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is beautifully done. I love how you wrote Hermione. Very nice buildup to a very satisfying ending. Nice Job!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must commend you on your story, and the plot. I had just finished watching Donnie Darko and this brought back a lot of it to my mind, keep up the good work, I can\'t wait to read any future fics you have planned, or are planning to write(which I hope you do, your ability, and ship-ing is something that has been missing since HBP and we need more of it).