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for Punishment for Being Late

by Stacie484

person Persy
schedule September 3, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Yes!!!!! Hot!!!! Loved the dirty talk!!!!

schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good!!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Momo
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I just found this on my look out for a quick one shot before I have to go to work and this totally blew me away!
I usually like fics with more plot, or a bit more suspense before it gets real dirty, but this was just what I needed right now!
I don't agree with someone said here before. -Sure in a real world this would be totally wrong and the fact that many fics include role play and God knows what makes it all more politically correct, but seriously, this is fan fiction, it is about all these things that we will never get in an official book! I want abuse, I want rape! And to be honest it bores me, if these things are hidden in the characters playing role play. It can be good, but mostly I find it lame. You need that in real life to enjoy these things. Let fiction be fiction and go crazy with it!
I loved this! Now I am totally upside down in my head and have to go to work, damnit! ;)
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person angelgrl198816
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This IS GREAT! Please add more! What is going to happen with Snape and Hermoine? Please tell

me thats not just it! I need more! I must know! I can't wait! I hope you will add to this
e-mail me when you update or whatever:
angelgrl198816@hotmail.com (main)
norgeangel88@yahoo.com (Harry Potter fan-fics)
Your a GREAT writer keep it up!
Please and Thank you,
Alexandra17
person MORTICIA HEARTLESS
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN I wish I were Hermione!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cawdor
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooookay. Here\'s the thing. In the SS/HG corner of the fandom, PWPs with detention *roleplay* scenarios are really, really common. Thus, people like me who see a summary like yours assume, \"Ah. Detention. Detention *roleplay*. You know, as opposed to flat out abuse, about which there\'s not a damn thing that\'s erotic.\" And then
person SnapesPet30
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot story!!!!!!!!!!!