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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is freaking awsome!!! I love that there aren't more love-triangles than there is (I can't stand too much angst)! You've written them scaringly in character (or what I like to believe would be in character for the two of them, should they end up like this), which isn't usual for the average Dramione fic.
Only thing I'd like for the future chapters, is a little bit more fluff, even in the bedroom-scenes. Some of those scenes have seemed a bit rushed to me, although I know some of them were proably meant to be so. Just my two cents :) This is allready brilliant work! I'll definitely be checking for updates!
Only thing I'd like for the future chapters, is a little bit more fluff, even in the bedroom-scenes. Some of those scenes have seemed a bit rushed to me, although I know some of them were proably meant to be so. Just my two cents :) This is allready brilliant work! I'll definitely be checking for updates!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... that's so sweet!! He proposed... sort of. He actually just sort of told her that they were getting married- which is very in-character now that I think of it :P I liked the jealousy and insecurity, it plays upon the themes from the beginning of the story and makes it exciting! I am so happy with this story... So... Wedding? PLANNING for a wedding? and the honeymoon? how far are we going to go with this lovely story? I'll keep reading as long as you want to keep writing!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love it. I love it insanely. This is a wonderful story, your characterizations are phenominal, I love that Hermione is still unsure of herself and swayed by rumor...and more than that that Draco can forgive her for it. This story is sweet, hot, funny, and just well...all the other good adjectives.
Can I just say that I adsolutely adored the part where Harry was whining about his lack of pictures and manipulating the women! I know that was a few chapters ago, but I'm all kinds of discombobulated with my fangirling. So yeah. *loves*
Oh...do the ladies over at Dramione know about this fic?? *runs off to pimp*
Can I just say that I adsolutely adored the part where Harry was whining about his lack of pictures and manipulating the women! I know that was a few chapters ago, but I'm all kinds of discombobulated with my fangirling. So yeah. *loves*
Oh...do the ladies over at Dramione know about this fic?? *runs off to pimp*
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Good chapter!! ::Drool:: Please update soon! You're doing a marvelous job by the way!! PRETTY! I thought she would have learned to trust him by now and felt so bad when he told her to go..u.u Still. ::Wipes tears:: Its DRAMIONE!! You shall make it be so because you are an amazing writer! Don't ever stop writing and LONG LIVE DRAMIONE! Thank you for blessing us with this awesome DM/HG story and update soon!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!
I just read the latest chapter! And now I'm all hyper! I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD
YEEE!
It's great!
Can't wait for the next chap!
Luvs me always, ~Kinky_Sweetherat~
I just read the latest chapter! And now I'm all hyper! I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD
YEEE!
It's great!
Can't wait for the next chap!
Luvs me always, ~Kinky_Sweetherat~
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just devoured, I mean devoured the first three chapters and I'm forcing myself to stop and comment. I love this fic so much already, and I still have 12 chapters to go, I'm so excited! Your characterizations are wonderful, I love that Hermione was crushed by Oliver...not because of him so much but because of her frustration, I totally understand that feeling. And the bit with Theo was wonderful, it was so real. Well, and Draco...he's such an ass, I adore him for it! I love noble!ass!Draco though! Hermione's emotions are spot-on, as well as Draco's fighting to stay removed from the situation. Oh! Lucius! *snogs him* sorry about that. I love your Lucius and I truly adore Narcissa, very few people write her well and I love what you have done! Wonderful darling, I'm off to read more!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I held out for a few more chapters before squeeing with insane fangirlness! I love this chapter, I loved the date, you wrote it just perfectly! I'm so glad that Draco is honorable, I knew he would be, but I'm still quite pleased. Maybe it's the 'Old World' thing but I just see him being that way, placing her on the couch...treating her as she should be treated. Of course, I won't be surprised if he teases her mercilessly in the future, but that is why we love him so much. Lush!Hermione is too much fun, and to me perfectly in character, she's so naturally repressed that is just works for me.
Okay, I can't contain myself anymore, I'm off to read...
Okay, I can't contain myself anymore, I'm off to read...
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO COMPLETELY F***KING LOOOOVE THIS STORY! ABSOLUTELY MY FAVE DRACO/HERMIONE YET! BRAVO!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was going to try to make it another three chapters but I can't. I adore this fic. Completely and crazily. And dear Lord that was HOT! Damn cat!! And I have to remember to say that I love how that Lucius and Narcissa are busy into Draco's life now that they have so much free time what with not being minions of the Dark Lord anymore. I meant to say that before, but yeah, there it is. *loves*
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!
No need to be nervous about anything...I loved it :)
No need to be nervous about anything...I loved it :)