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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person moxie
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A GREAT chapter- thank you SO much for the prompt updates.
person fiona
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it! update soon!
person DB2020
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Conflicting emotions here. I started off laughing my ass off at Draco\'s parents. Never before have I actually liked Lucius in a story, and yet here I was laughing and thinking he\'s awesome. Then by the end of the chapter everything became so serious and I wanted to jump in and intervene, but alas that is the angst and drama. Another great chapter ^_^ I love your writing, keep it up!
person Michelle
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, so much, lilycat. CONSIDER ME *grins* your #1 fan. I love stories like this, where Narcissa and Lucius are nice and act like really wizard people. I also love this draco, his stubborn and pigheaded, he won\'t listen to what his mind is saying and i love that because denial makes thing more...........excited. I feel sorry for draco in chapter 4. So....he has feeling for hermione, but he won\'t admit them, till something bad happens. Hope u update soon. Keep up the good work. I\'m the same michelle from you others stories, that i\'ve review.
person kella
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, sad face.
poor draco. he is so angry at the world.
person Liz
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still really loving this story. It\'s very original, in how it\'s progressing. It\'s more natural than most- no quick smut with little to no emotional development. It\'s wrong to think that two people with such a tumultous past could instantly become enamored of each other. Anyway, well done and I can\'t wait to see where you take this. Update soon!!!
person lorett
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY Lilycat!

I just saw your review and decided to pop on over and see if you had any works to read. And, how glad I am that I did. This is a wonderful story and I look forward to reading the rest. You\'re bringing around a nice, well-rounded Draco and that is always a pleasure to read.

This was my fav line by far. SO Draco like:

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person Bambu
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read your first chapters and have enjoyed it quite a bit. You\'ve pegged Hermione\'s insecurities beautifully, and the fact that Oliver wasn\'t interested, even if it was just because of timing, was believably hurtful. I\'ve had roommates who would hit a bar or nightclub to pick up a man just to prove to themselves that they were desirable, and I could see Nott wanting to \'teach her a lesson.\' All in all, it\'s a very plausible set up, and Malfoy\'s coming to the rescue was a nice thing to see. He was a gentleman despite their earlier history. I look forward to reading where you take the story, but also wanted to congratulate you on a modulated and very nice encapsulation of the changes in Lucius. I think they\'re very reasonable, and I enjoyed reading them in your story so far.
person Kristal
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO!! im loving this story!!! PLEASE update ASAP!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! its very interesting!! :)
i cant wait to see more of it...
If you wouldnt mind emailing me when you do update? my email address is: Kristal_Cerveja@hotmail.com
hehe i wanna be the first to know!! :)
kk thnx
byes
Kristal
person DB2020
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another awesome chapter. I applaude your blatant talent ^_^ You\'re a great author. I still eagerly await future chapters... I\'m hooked, what can I say? Hehe, keep up the great work!

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