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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Anon
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fabulous. can\'t wait for the next chapter! :) poor hermione. I hate waking up the next morning and remembering all the silly things I\'d done the night before...*le sigh* how embarrassing :P
person mandy_shades
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve just finished reading all of the chapters up to this piont and i have to say that i am enjoying your story alot. it\'s very cute and i hope that you can get the chapters out fast. it hard to find a story like this because i find others hard to get throught because there very unreal. Your writing has the right pace to it and i my opinion you depict the characters ( Hermione and Draco ) right on. I can\'t wait for the next chapters.

Mandy shades
person Liz
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your pacing so far. It wouldn\'t do for them to fall into something too fast. Especially with their past. And I liked that Draco was the gentleman in the matter. It seems to be developing quite naturally, and they still have that biting banter between them that we\'ve all come to expect (without the violent tendencies). Update soon !!!
person SlytherinsWench
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way that Narcissa and Lucius argued him into a corner about Hermione, as slick as Draco is, he still wouldn\'t be able to get one over on his mother. :)
person sam
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the direction you\'re going with this story! :) no wham-bam-thank-you-ma\'am. :) i love draco in this story too, really sweet, and i love their banter. great story! :) update soon please. :)
person Michelle
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying your fic! Draco is snarky without being intolerable; Hermione is brilliant and controlling without being obnoxious. And Ron and Harry are their usual loving, goofy selves. I\'m looking forward to finding out if they have a second date!
person Liz
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM

LilyCat, that was so charming! (Oliver Twist voice): please ma\'am I want some more(grin), that pretty much sums it up! Good work!

Liz
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I love how you have put so much humor into this. I like this story as well as your others. I think your an excellent writer. This has become one of my favorite stories and I\'ll be looking forward to every single chapter from now on and also any other story you write from now on, considering that now I am a fan of yours.
Anyways keep up the awesome work, and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
PEACE Isa
person jaxie926
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
New to the site, love your story!!! Please update soon!
person Loziana
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wonder how long it will be before Lucius and Narcissa start to play match maker a bit more. Great stuff keep writing.
Loz