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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Sommer
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope things go well when she meets his parents.
More soon please
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again another successful chapter. Everything about this story is so fun and light hearted. And the sweet side of Draco just totally makes this story. I was laughing at the moments between Hermione and Draco when Crookshanks interrupts them, poor Draco! Hilarious. The humor is awesome, but it\'s not just the humor that makes this story... the intensity between the two of them is an overload that is really enjoyable to watch unfold. Totally making this one of my favorites making it very hard for me to choose which is.
Awesome and keep up the great work and I can\'t wait for the next chapter to come. Thanks for not keeping us to wait too long for that last chapter... I hope it won\'t be too long for the next. I love this story.
PEACE Isabel
person moxie
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! A great chapter. I liked how he was waiting for her in her apt. and how Crookshanks is now wrapped around his pretty little pedicured finger.
person ricie
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love it! Can\'t wait to find out what happens at dinner with the Malfoys. Love your Lucius and Narcissa, even if they are OOC- it\'s cute.
person ancientgirl
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Draco\'s explaination about his parents needing to be able to plot at something. I\'m looking forward to more.
person intcrimgrrl
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story - very tightly written so far. I love the scene with Draco having to admit why his parents want Hermione to visit, and his giving into her demand so quickly was clever. And I love her reaction to his immediate agreement...very well done, I\'m looking forward to more chapters!
person YumLovely
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
V. nice. And what a tease you are. I feel amusement contemplating the meeting of the families. More please! I think I\'ve successfully put off reading the iliad entirely. Not a good thing- but v. satisfying.
person Liz
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really loved this chapter! The dialogue was great and you\'ve really nailed the emotions. They\'re suitably detailed and diverse and the confusion feels real. Kudos! Keep \'em comin\'!!!
person Faeriewing
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummm... I want more!! Thoroughly enjoying each morsel...sorry so metaphorical (real word?) Just baked cookies today!! LOL anyways....I really do enjoy this story you got going here! More please!!! Totally loving the banter back and forth..clicks with my own dry humor! I can hear the wry tones of their voices through you dialogue! Yippeee...a woman after my own heart! Keep going with your story...I eagerly await the next serving! :)
person HiddenAllusion
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Crookshanks is becoming my favourite character... I like the change of heart, and his betrayal of Hermione - very amusing! I can\'t wait to see meeting the parents; anyway, excellent chapter yet again. Thank you!