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by cruttan

person Serenity
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* omg. you\'re amazing, this a fabulous story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter. hurryyyyyyyyyyyy
person saraj
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crookshanks is a bitch!

I love the picture of Draco ignoring her in the morning, reading her Cosmo silently.

My favorite line was probably, \"Cooking, giving a house-elf specific instructions on what to cook, it\'s a fine line really.\"

Can\'t wait for more!
person Kristal
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! loved the interaction w. dracos parents.
and cant forget Crookshanks!! haha soo funny! i cracked up laughing!
look wht i started...a mailing list for u to email..haha nice
love the story!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!
thnx Kristal
(emails:))
person Michelle
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what will hermione do, since draco\'s out of town? what will draco be doing? hope to hear from you soon. I love your stories very much, i can\'t wait to read another chapter. I love this Playful Lucius and Narcissa. I wish i was in hermione\'s shoes. In this chapter (8) draco actted like a husband. Readind and cooking food, kind of funny. keep updating.
person Caliko
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
/snicker/ I can imagine Lucius asking Hermione if she\'s going to make an honest man of his son....... /ROFLMAO/ ~Caliko
person YumLovely
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cosmo!! I love crookshanks. And I especially liked Draco reading cosmo. V. fitting. Hermione\'s attitude is perfect- a mix of amazon with a touch of brazeness(word?) and decorum.
person Vnvim
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please PLEASE update soon!!! I\'m loving this story!! UPDATE UPDATE!!!! ^_^
person moxie
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are such a tease! i can\'t believe he fell asleep on her! what are they, narcoleptic! Hehe.
person lorett
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL SHUCKIE DARN! WHEE! Thanks so much Catherine! A WONDERFUL CHAPTER DEVOTED TO ME! YIPPEE!

I have to say that I LOVED it. The Narcissa and Lucius connection is FABULOUS. They are so cute and charming and indulgent...so, well, parental but in that rich/bored kinda way. Perfect. And - SNORT - Narcissa offering Hermione SEX POINTERS ON HOW TO HANDLE MALFOY MEN IN BED, OY VEY! I was ROLLING.

Lucius asking her if she\'d had a three-way with Harry and Ron...Narcissa telling her Draco would only be happily married to a strong woman - and sharing - so mother-like, her story about a young Draco saying he could only ever live with his mom. SIGH. Good times.

SO, back to the flat we go, and, please whipser a word of suggestion to Hermione for when Draco visits her next: PUT CROOKSHANKS OUTSIDE OR IN ANOTHER ROOM. That pesky kitty is clawing and scraping up a VERY important part of our blond darling, parts that do not perfer to be scratched (eyebrow furrowing in thought) or do they? Humm. Well, we won\'t KNOW THAT until we get ol\' Crooky out of the picture.....

Draco reading Cosmo. Now there\'s something for the books. Hermione reading Cosmo. I think that a teenage Hermione would NEVER, but an older, little bit softer Hermione just might. So, I didn\'t think that was too OOC.

Anyway, next time - no more kitty cat interruptions, plz.

LOVE AND KISSES! ENJOYED IT IMMENSELY!

MWAP!

L
person curlyq2713
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! just read story for the first time. it is very cute, and quite good! please update quickly so i\'m not on edge waiting for the next good chapter to come. :-D