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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person luna luck
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was great...not too mushy not to smutty ...perfect. Awaiting the next chapter patiently!
person rain
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honi,

I\'m terriably behind in my reading but am finally getting caught up with your wonderful story. So to rave about chapter seven...I have to tell you how much I loved this paragraph:

person jessy
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! this story is so good! i love you so much for writing such an awesome story! please update soon!
person Nina
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story! It is one of the most realistic D/Hr fics I have ever read, and I really enjoy reading it :) I think it is very hard to keep especially Draco in character, because we never see him act gentle in the books, and therefor this genre can be kind of.. difficult. But, like I said, you pull it off fantastically. Kotgw :)
person RockaDy
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love IT!!!!! :D i like the sontanous thingy, not knowing 3 chapters in advance when they are going to get into action is pretty cool, keeps the mystery thingy going on:P keep on writting it\'s great cheer! cheer!!
person jess
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! It\'s great to see Draco possessive of Hermione, don\'t you think? Keep the good work up!! Already looking foward to your next update!
person Kristal
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Jaimi
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! great work can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!
person Sommer
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank god they finally did it.
I couldn\'t blame Hermione for thinking the way that she did.
Can\'t wait for more
person Emmeline Vance
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

I\'m so happy with the recent developements in your story. It was touching that it was Hermione\'s first time, and the bit about Harry goading Ron with Ginny was just so good! It added a little touch of comedy to this romance, and was a huge contrast to the dark mood when Hermione spots Draco with the hawt!woman.

Also, I absolutely adored the sex scene. Tender yet hot! Thanks again for the wonderful update, and hope there\'ll be more to read soon. Peace!

Love, me.