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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww, that was cute.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the elder malfoys were very amusing and a great addition to the fic.
{A novel idea, I know, but it just may have merit. } ^____^
{A novel idea, I know, but it just may have merit. } ^____^
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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yay, i like his interferring parents.
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yay, i like his interferring parents.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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^_____________^ thier chemistry is just so fluffy.
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^_____________^ thier chemistry is just so fluffy.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!
This was a very sweet chapter. Hahah Hermione reacted a bit too quickly! So jealous...
This is an awesome story! Keep up the great work!
This was a very sweet chapter. Hahah Hermione reacted a bit too quickly! So jealous...
This is an awesome story! Keep up the great work!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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^____^ my god this fic just gets better and better
lucius and naricissa were to die for, poor draco. love how the parents kept insinuating marriage.
and crookshanks shoving hermione off :D esp with his protesting of her putting her clothes back on.
and the cosmo bit was great. and i like how she was laughing cause she was too mortified and amused to do anything else.
oh and liked the linein the last chapter {Look, I
^____^ my god this fic just gets better and better
lucius and naricissa were to die for, poor draco. love how the parents kept insinuating marriage.
and crookshanks shoving hermione off :D esp with his protesting of her putting her clothes back on.
and the cosmo bit was great. and i like how she was laughing cause she was too mortified and amused to do anything else.
oh and liked the linein the last chapter {Look, I
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww man, i hope you update quite frequently because i was definately spoiled getting all these nine chapters at once.
amused at harry baiting ron like that. but good thing they are married otherwise it would be mean and so unfriendlike.
glad to see that harry thoguht draco had good reason and he would be the type to be upfront about seeing other people.
totally applauded draco for grabbing hermione and appartating with her. though i do got to wonder at g/r/h\'s reaction to that is.
please please write soon! and we still have the promise of meeting hermione\'s parents.
amused at harry baiting ron like that. but good thing they are married otherwise it would be mean and so unfriendlike.
glad to see that harry thoguht draco had good reason and he would be the type to be upfront about seeing other people.
totally applauded draco for grabbing hermione and appartating with her. though i do got to wonder at g/r/h\'s reaction to that is.
please please write soon! and we still have the promise of meeting hermione\'s parents.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crookshanks, furball of fury! Anyway, chapter wight was lovely. I thought the Cosmo\'s were cute and I too know many intelligent woman that pursue those forbiddin pages. I especially think that it is in character for your Hermione, who is a bit insecure about her looks and alure to the opposite sex. Pefect little omlets, pouting, and Draco sleeping over. Busy little chapter here, girlie.
I really enjoyed the dinner conversation as well. It was clever and well thought out. Hermione treating Draco\'s parents like \"Naughty Children\" was very original and cute.
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I really enjoyed the dinner conversation as well. It was clever and well thought out. Hermione treating Draco\'s parents like \"Naughty Children\" was very original and cute.
Rain
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. Your characterisation is some of the best I\'ve seen and I commend you for it. I enjoyed the developments of all characters and enjoyed the fact that there is a Ginny/ Harry coupling (one I\'ve always supported) not to mention Hermoine and Draco. They\'re both spot on, not merely oversexed teenagers as many portray them as but having well rounded personalities.
Well done !
Well done !
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm Possessive Draco. My favorite Draco. Second favorite Draco? Snarky Draco. You write both so well. Beautiful smut. I enjoyed the way Draco didn\'t let Hermione run away as she is often wont to due in his presence. The misunderstanding was well written and plausable. I also liked that it was Hermione\'s first time. i guess we know for sure that she hasn\'t been manipulating Ron and Harry with sex to make them do as she wants/