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by cruttan

person cleopatra
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is the best! I dont think I want her for my mum but she\'s hilarious! Nice way of getting rid of Chantal too. Poor Crookshanks - he\'s not going to be happy when he realises he might have to share for some tiime is he? thanks for another fantastic chapter!
person Michelle
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! I can just see him squirming about whether his mother was torturing Hermione. That they just did girly stuff is great - Hermione has never had much of that, has she? I really like this Draco - virtually unrelated to canon, but scrumptious all the same. Keep up the great writing - I\'m having a ball reading :)

Cheers,
Michelle
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!
I love ALL the jealousy stuff. I think jealousy is the most brilliant and gut wrenching thing. It makes you nervous and I like the way you portray it you story. I think the best is Draco\'s jealousy. Very passionate. Almost to the point of beauty. I love your style of writing.
Can\'t wait to see what else you have coming.
PEACE Isa
person Michelle
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. This was a good chapter. I loved the scene were hermione and the malfoy\'s were eating together. I also loved the last romantic scene. keep up the good work and update soon.
person Serenity
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Witchiepooh
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yee-hawwww! Another great chapter. I liked Draco\'s comments about Hermione yelling \"Harry and Ron!\" while in the throes of passion... tee hee heee... I will patiently look forward to your next update. :)
person curlyq2713
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, very cute!
person Sommer
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gotta love that Cat.
Great Part
person Silver_Eyes (not signed in)
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is fantastic, you are an excellent writer...i wish i could write as well as you, the story is great and i like how you\'ve let Hermione and Draco keep their original personalitys (makes it more realistic that way) great great fic continue....or else! mwahahaha
person genrou
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
5.
i liked hermione\'s answer/response to oliver.

and neat that harry confessed and luckily hermione was talked out of it being out of pity.