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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Petalsoft
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! It was a cute scene with D and H at the end when Hermione was a bit bashful about a \'certain\' act. LOL I could just picture it all in my head. You\'ve got a very well written story here. Looking forward to lots more.
person YumLovely
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful wonderful thing. I love you. It makes my day so much better...and longer. You should update again. Soon. So I can read more fiction. And send more adulation your way. Because I know you love it so.
person jchaser
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story...your writing is so enjoyable to read...love the premise and the way you have them battling back and forth...all sounds dead on.
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

So glad that you\'ve finally updated, and nearly cried in joy during the shower scene and the Lucius/Narcissa/Draco/Hermione bonding scene. Wonderful stuff, and hot sex was the perfect way to end this wonderful chapter. Thanks again, and really hope to read more soon. Peace!

Love, me.
person Bek Allen
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh!

Loved it! Can\'t wait till you update again (I hope it\'s soon!). And it was nice to see Crookshanks still being a pain. I actually was waiting for him to pop up. And when he did, I was like \"Bugger off Crookshanks.\" lol

Bek
person killisandra
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn\'t really know what to expect when I picked this story but I am so happy i did. It was amazing, and I really like the composition of the story. The plot is great and the Malfoy parental units are great. Lucius isn\'t out of character and Narcissa is perfect, manipulating with a devious streak. I like it a lot. You must continue. Hope your creative juices are flowing as I look forward to more soon.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person geo
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. You did the scene just right for their characters. I would like too see alot more from this story! Thanks it was great. Perfect and Hot!

geo
person Kristal
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha howd crookshanks get there??? hehe
loved the chapter!!!!!
please update ASAP!!
thnx
kristal
(email me:))
person GriseldaMarchbanks
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...Has Draco gone soft? Cute chapter; Draco\'s concern is adorable. Keep writing!
GM
person ancientgirl
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I really love Narcissa here. I\'m hoping though that Lucius doesn\'t go behind her back and do something with Chantal. Great chapter.