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*Sigh*

All good things must come to an end, yeah? But it was a fun, sexy ride, girl! Great job with this story, I give you so much credit as a writer for staying true to your vision- it payed off at the end. Hermione finally got her confidence back after her attempted rape and she got her man!

Ahhh... Am happy now :P

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Soooo... What are you going to write next? ^_^

Oh Cat!!! Lovely chappy like always!!! I love your story sooo much!! I sent it to my friend so she could read it and she loves it too!!! I was wondering, I started to write my own fanfic of Hermione and Draco and was wondering if you could... maybe... if its not to much trouble.... Check it out for me.... If not I totally understand!! But anyways... I love how you had Hermione's dad react! that was just plan cute!! His baby girl all grown up.... Narcissa was a hoot!! Love how you made her get all excited!! I can't wait for your next chappy and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday!!

Love Debi!!

Cat!!!

Wow! I'm SO SORRY it's taken me a while to get over here! What has happened these last few weeks? I've been so crazy busy with work I've not been paying attention at all to the group, so if you've mentioned it there, I apologize. Are you okay now? Hope so. I hope you and your husband and family had a wonderful, beautiful Christmas and New Year too.

I don't know if you knew, but I was in Texas with my husband's family over Christmas, we drove there and I just got back late Friday night, so I'm doing my reading and catching up.

Anyway - GASP! This is the LAST CHAPTER! EEKS! I can't believe it's over. Well this has been a wonderful journey, to say the least! It's brought you into my life and into the groups' life and we're all so much better for getting to know you. Are you writing anything new? Let me know.

My darling, this was such a great way to wind down your amazing story. I'm so thrilled and honored to know you and to know that you enjoyed my little ficlet too. Your appreciation of my writing does wonders for my ego - grin -as you're so clearly talented!

So, I'd comment on the specifics of this chapter that I loved, but really, it was just perfect all the way around. I thought the idea of the dungeons was hysterical and the horrified look on Ginny's face was spot on. The Slytherin bunch was great too, Pansy - she can be such a wench!

But the sweetness and love with which you write Draco and Hermione is what is most captivating and endearing, and you do it so very well. Wit, humor, tenacity, desire, tenderness and understanding - all mixed together with a sprinkling of love. That's your Draco and Hermione and I'm most honored to have met them and fallen in love right along with everyone eles.

Shoot me an email when you have a moment and fill me in on what's happening with you, darling.

Kisses and Happy 2006,

Lorett

what is your problem with people getting drunk and embarrassing themselves in front of draco? you made hermione into a druken slut.

that was the best draco/hermoine fanfic that i read....it was really really good! even the bedroom scenes between the two are nicely detailed....*drooling*...^_^...anyways well done. i lurrve it!!!

It's Dixi, I'm just too lazy to sign in...

I can't believe I missed this! Seriously, I don't know what is wrong with me. Oy. Well, onto business... That my dear was fabulous, a wonderful evolution of Hermione, I love that she held her own at the end with Pansy and the other little chit. *glomps* for including Millicent and making her have a personality (and a good one!) I adore her and I can't stand it when people assume that she hasn't evolved in ten or fifteen years! So, it's over?? Oh, well that just means it's time for a new one right?? hee!

I think you've really done a good job with this story. Draco/Hermione is one of the most difficult pairings to write in my opinion, just because so much has been done, written, expounded upon, etc. And you did beautifully, I liked the evolution of the characters and the story, you avoided a lot of stereotypes...and even, dare I say, had a bit of fun with some of them.

Brava darling! You most certainly deserve those awards!!

*HUGS*

Ohh...and how could a good 80's girl miss Meg Ryan's line from Top Gun?! Wonderful inclusion love!!

I loved your story to the very end. It was full of sweet, realistic moments. I absolutely loved your Draco, Harry and Ron. But most of all, you know I ADORED your Lucius.
Special mention has to be made too, for Milllicent. Short part, but nicely done. I liked your tough-but-good Millicent. Sounds right to me. Only one who can control Pansy.
However, I feel like the restaurant scene was sort of excessive. Maybe it's just my little heart getting used to the fact that there will be no more Catalyst... but it felt a little rushed for me. ( A little voice in the back of my head says it was not rushed, that it HAD to finish sometime ). Mmmmh. Maybe the little voice is right.
I enjoyed your story very much, it made for a lot of wonderful minutes of reading. I look forward to reading something more written by you. You are very talented...
And if I could have my way.... you'd write a Lucius and Narcissa story... they are just WONDERFUL.
Much love!
accio

Oh man. That was...excellent! I really loved the story, I reeeeeeally did. You had me literally laughing out loud during so many scenes, especially the Draco and Ron and Harry scene in the bathroom towards the beginning of the story (chapter four?). That was hilarious! I couldn't stop reading. Sometimes I just wanted to shake Hermione for being so...so stupid. I was like, "Gah! You dolt! How could you believe that?!" when she found the article. And then I got all misty-eyed during the proposal, laughing at the same time. It was ludicrous! But hilarious. Yes, two thumbs way up.

I simply adored Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy. They weren't exactly what I'd have expected (and a first I was wondering what it was you were doing) but they really did grow on me. Best Out of Character Characters of the Year Award, I would say. ^.-

One question, though - what happened to Ginny being pregnant?

Write another story! xD

Take me to bed or lose me forever? I think it just doesn't work unless it's delivered in a fake Southern accent. Sorry to see that it's over, I enjoyed it very much.

I love your writing style, I think it's a good fic. However, I find Hermione's insecurities a bit exagerated. When she found Chantal and Draco at a restaurant she purposely seeked male attention. She got it... as you described she had various men at her disposal. How could she be so insecure then? Not only that, but Hermione is a very intelligent person, granted she's a bit insecured, but she wouldn't just jump to conclusions as many times as you written. I like the story except for those little bits and the fact that you make Hermione out to be weak, typical stereotypical female. You're writting is good, you just need to work on character characterizationsn. I love Ginny and Harry's dynamic... I do picture Ginny with lots of brats... :D

Loulu