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by cruttan

person mrs_accio_firebolt
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, hello.
Loved it, hated it? Loved it.
Cher and Sonny? I enjoyed wench-Hermione too much to even try to think of a better costume.
Have a lovely Halloween yourself. Go trick or treating.

This chapter gave the characters a lot of realism. They\'re witches and wizards, but they are also people. Who prepare Halloween parties, who fight over costumes, who get enthusiastic at learning a new alcoholic recipe... It was a very... hmm... let me say \"comforting\" chapter. They were all happy. They were all human.

Ron\'s little appearance was a jewel. He\'s there, so ready for the fun. Just lovely.

And Harry. My Harry. You know I love him. I don\'t know why this whole chapter had this aura of reality for me. I just loved Harry being late for work and not giving a damn. He\'s The One. The Saviour of the Wizarding World. So, why should he care? There\'s a point in the story where I could actually picture him slipping a hand on his pocket and shrugging about being late. Like any other person.

It was a lovely chapter indeed. Much love!
accio
person Evil Turtle
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love it! I can\'t wait for your next update. there is going to be more right???
person tabitoo
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Clapps hands and squels with joy. No seriously, it was great. Loved drunk pirate Malfoy, sweet and sexy how could you go wrong.;)
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love your writing!! Update soon.
person lusi
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is perfecttttt. i lke that. thanks
person lemonade
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! You can\'t resist pirates! I liked the first choice of costume for her, too It was every man\'s fantasy-- Slave Leia. But Capn\' Draco Sparrow sounds good to me! His hysterical declaration of love, not to mention the toddler picture.... He\'s going to be a few shades of purple soon when he finds out. Your Draco is quite sexy, *applause*. I always check for more of this fic, it\'s quite enjoyable.
person Pam
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, very funny. Please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute and Hilarious! A drunken Malfoy is absolutley brilliant!
I loved this chapter... I love the fact that you showed Draco\'s tender side, that he can even have his feelings hurt. I thought that was sweet. And talk about jaw-dropping. \'The woman I love\', I loved that... not to mention \'The Dread Pirate Malfoy\'- that was so funny.
I loved that whole thing... I think their customs were perfect, the pirate for Draco was perfect - so ... \'Draco\'.
Anyway, I loved the whole thing and can\'t wait for the next thing to come our ways.
I am sure it will be great.
person Liz
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still love it. Draco is transforming before our eyes. His underlying sweetness is rearing its odd head. Update soon !!!
person SlythErin
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM