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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Vashka
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was quite well done darling, bravo. As I have said before, I especially like your dialogue... so snappy! Draco calling Hermione a Wench was hilarious. I also liked his list... I am glad to see they are still having problems (erhm... that didn\'t come out right) What I mean is that sex didn\'t magically solve all of their troubles, and that they still have emotional issues to work out. The Party was very nice as well, I like the idea of an intoxicated Draco, yum! And his confession was nicely timed- will he remember it in the morning? We\'ll find out soon I hope!
person Kenda
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'m sorry I\'m terrible at reviews I always get self concious about what to write, but i wanted to say how much I was enjoying your story. Droco made such a brilliant pirate and i loved the line with \'The Dread Pirate Malfoy\' in, made me picture him all dressed up like The Dread Pirate Roberts in A Pricess Bride, very sexy.

I also reaaly liked the way you used Draco rescuing Hermione from Theodore Nott at the beguinning to allow for trust to be formed from hermione and her friends towards Draco, it made the situation very believable.

Anyway can\'t wait to read more and thanks.
person lorett
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Running up to Cat and HUGGING YOU TIGHTLY!

Snort! WHEE! THIS STORY IS JUST SO MUCH FUN!!

There were just SO MANY things I loved about this chapter!

\'Draco puffed his chest up, tapping the handle of his sword menacingly.
person Miki
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the most engaging H/D fanfics I\'ve read. Well thought out, coherent, and oh so easy to read! Love it so far! :) Up at 1:30 when I should be in bed.

I really like their dating was the result of an unexpected event. No pining Hermione or Draco here, that has gotten a bit stale.

Your secondary characters are fleshed out nicely. I especially like Narcissa\'s and Lucius\' biplay. Crookshanks\' defection is a good touch. Poor Ron, someday he\'ll just have to accept, that yes his sister and Harry are having sex. Probably when their last child is born.

Draco\'s unexpected tenderness is wonderful, because it is private. I like that his sarcasm is still very much evident unless faced by Hermions\'s distress. Very realistic.

Just an incredibly lovely story. I can\'t wait for more!
person Emmeline Vance
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!

Thanks so much for the fantastic update! I\'m so glad that I\'m finally reading more of this story, and I absolutely loved your portrayal of Draco\'s inebriated state after his declaration that Malfoys do not get drunk. Fantastic and comical!

The chapter was so beautifully sweet, and I especially loved the little details such as Harry and Draco getting along, and the wet t-shirt contest which we unfortunately missed out on. Damn!

As usual, I can\'t wait till the next chapter is out, and hope that I can be added to the e-mail reminder list. Thanks heaps, and peace!

Love, me.
person john the heavy
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really love their relationship as its not perfect and has its ups and downs^^ Plus you can\'t go wrong when you got a sexy brunette wench with a CORSET! Someone should make a pirate fic for Herm and Draco! Five stars on the latest fic!
person cleopatra
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can i have a picture of two year old Draco? Please? Pplleeaassee? Ill be careful with it I promise! Great chapter, as usual. Will inebriated (not that Malfoy\'s get inebriated of course!) Draco remember what he said to Hermione? Could be interesting?! Looking forward to a hungover, post Halloween celebration chapter! Thanks
person Audrey
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fun!! Can\'t wait for more!!

AUdrey
person Narcissa Black
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Dread Pirate Malfoy, huh? Inconceivable. I have been enjoying this story very much. I did notice that Ron asked that Hermione not take Draco away, not that SHE should stay longer. I like that you have them as adults, but not yet parents. They have all been through so much, they should stay up late, eat food that\'s bad for you, and get drunk at least 3 nights a week. Life is never the same after those incredibly demanding, all-consuming little people arrive. Nothing else seems very important anymore, but maybe I don\'t care because I ate, drank and was merry while I was young.

More, please.
person Karen
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the \"no collars\" restriction. Pirates is a bit cliche, but Draco wanted Hermione in a skimpy outfit . . . You handled it in a non-cliche manner. His waving around of the sword was absolutely adorable.

Aw, a lover\'s spat. Even their arguments are cute. :-) And the picture of two-year old Draco and the unrepentant Hermione\'s great too.