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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person lemonade
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!!! Pirate sex!!! \'Dread Pirate Malfoy\', I bow to your... stamina.

This was cute. I liked-- and he finally fesses up about his feelings.
person tabitoo
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I do, I do too....awww how sweet. Your Draco is positively Hot, romantic, and cute at the same time. Though he remains Draco through and through. Good job. Like your Hermione too, your chracters are true. :)
person Bek Allen
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another amazing chapter!

I loved the way Draco played it cool with Hermione over the \'L\' word, especially the way he admitted it whilst he was sober. Please update soon!

Bek

PS: Hehehehe, Suffer Crookshanks! Suffer!
person KittyBennet
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a beautiful chapter. I\'m happy that you clarified on the \"L\" word instead of leaving it where it was. I still think the pirate thing was lame though, hopefully the Halloween bit is over with. No offence its just not my cup of tea. Would rather you made him a vampire and Hermione the slayer or maybe his late night snack. Different strokes for differnt folks.
person Michelle
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lilycat: I don\'t know, how to tell you, how much I LOVE your stories. They make me laugh, make me cry. When I\'m reading a new chapter it makes my toes curl. It\'s so unexpected what you\'re going to write and this is one quality I LOVE ABOUT YOU AND YOUR STORIES. You attracted people with a simple, yet beautiful story or chapter, I don\'t know how you do it, but don\'t throw away that gift. I can\'t tell you how much your stories make my day, they are funny, SEXY, and alot more. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter, and I LOVED pirate, Draco, you made him sound so sexy. Especially, when his whispering in his husky voice, naughty words. Hermione is one lucky witch. Hope to hear from you. Happy Halloween, everyone!
person Michelle
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why haven\'t you used pet names *pouts* I LOVE PET NAMES. Especially, if it\'s Draco saying them to Hermione. Hope you write some pet names in your story like the last chapter. I\'m the same michelle. I reviewed, again. I\'m a pet name person, you can tell. lol. Hope to hear from you soon update soon.
person Swaummy
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic!!!! I love what you have done with the characters. Absolutely hilarious!!! Keep the chapters coming!!!
person lullaby87 (kenzi)
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha wonderful chapter. I love hallowe\'en!! :D:D:D and pirates! arrr!
sorry I haven\'t reviewed for a while, I\'ve been horrendously busy. I had a spare moment though, and felt i should catch up with this wonderful story. I\'m glad I did! I love where this is going...silly drunken draco professing his love. how cute :) *swoon*
also, I\'d love to be added to your update list :)
person NAR
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Catalyst is one of the best Dramoine fics I\'ve ever read. It is nothing less of perfection. I love the snark and Draco and Hermoine are just so cute together! Please keep writing and thank you so much for sharing with us. You\'re very talented. Update soon!
person Snarky4Severus
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I believe that Hermione would behave like she was unsure of her womanly wiles (he hee) - although I am sure thta Draco will work on that... Please put me on the update list for this story. Keep up the excellent work!