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by cruttan

person moonjameskitten
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a HOT and great chapter ! and you do have something with Pirats ! lol ! I like the way you describe Draco\'s steamy and..stormy eyes when he trusts in Hermione...it\'s is so SEXY !
Also like it when you made him spoke near her ears ... who can stay insensible at that ??
Please, I love your story ! Update soon !!

Moonie
xxx
person dracohotstuff
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! keep it up!
person aleja21
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, i hope their is more to come, i was also wondering if you\'d let me know when you update next.

aleja
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there aren\'t the words to describe......im addicted.....its the most enchanting story, i think ur characterisation of Draco is perfect!! wow apprently there are words to describe lol. anyway my only qualm is that its not updated often enough, but that thirst for the continuation of the story could never be quenched, but i guess u receive that alot!! its Brilliant
person RahNee
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Cat darling! You totally saved me from a really bad fanfic last night... I was reading this very poorly written story, and after Draco and Hermione had their 50th fight (I really am surprised I read as many chapters as I did before giving up on it) I threw up my hands and went to check the group site for amusing emails. And I saw that you had updated, and I decided that the last thing I read before I went to bed should be something GOOD, and I knew your chappie would deliver...and it DID! Thank goodness!

So now that I am rereading with the intent to review, I love it even more! This whole pirate role play scene had me rolling on the floor laughing and at the same time fanning myself and reaching for the smelling salts as I swooned: that is a compliment of the highest level, that you could write something so HOT and HILARIOUS at the same time. The visualization of Draco lopping off the top of the hangover bottle with his sword, and swigging it like it was bootleg rum... priceless! And the \"I don\'t like your tone\" and the throwing Hermione over his shoulder was so funny and yummy! And when she asked him to keep the eyepatch on... I hit the floor. I think I fainted, but I was too busy rolling and laughing to be sure. The hot \"pirate sex\" with a little dirty talk thrown in was fabulous!

And the whole \"clarification\" of the \"woman I love\" stuff was WELL DONE! This just made me giddy:
person Sheila
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!
person Debi
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I love it very much, I love that you did parts with Narcissa and Lucius as well. I Love Draco so much!!! Yummy Man!! LoL You make him sound so tasty. Your writing is very wonderful. You explain everything so well. Which is great btw. I loved the Halloween stuff to, funny. You had a lot of humor in this story as well, which I love btw. I can\'t wait to read more! I hope you add the next chapter soon. Keep up the fantastic work and Have loads of fun!! I know I do reading your story!! :-)



<3 Debi --;@
person kenzi
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* drool! lol. mmmmmmm Pirate Draco. Where is my boyfriend when I need him? :P hehehe.
Awesome chapter....they both seemed very in character. Changed, obviously from their Hogwarts days...evolved into their present selves. It seemed very true of both of them though. I liked Hermione\'s embarrassed request that he leave the patch on, not wanting to admit to enjoying anything in any way improper. And I loved that Draco managed to confess his love without ever actually saying the L word. very cute. very believable :P
person Amada
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for I am a horrible, horrible person. Hee hee. I have been reading this story for some time and must say it is amazing. It is brilliantly written!!! Oh and pirate Draco was just a bonus. Awesome work and sorry I didnt review sooner. :D I want more!!! Lol.
person Michelle
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pirates rule! Draco Pirates rule even more. arrrgh!