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*sigh* i hate my life... lol. fab writing, keep it coming! *waves little flags*

Hola, hola.

As always, beautiful chapter. Harry made me laugh so hard. Sweet Harry, terrified about having a baby. This part specially touched me cause I\'ve never felt this maternal-instinct. I\'m absolutely terrified, as Harry, of being responsible of \"another human being\". The horror! *sigh* But I\'m sure he\'d make a GREAT dad. Specially if the baby is a girl... Just imagine! He\'d melt. She\'d have him drooling all over the place. *sigh*

But perhaps the line that I enjoyed the most is the one in which Fred and George start whispering among themselves in such a way that they made everyone else nervous. LOL. I love the twins... and would certainly be terrified if they started whispering in my presence...

As to the end of the chapter... lovely. It is one of the few fics I\'ve read when I do not covet (is that a word?) Draco. He\'s so perfect for Hermione. She should have him (OMG, what am I saying??). Maybe we should get a clon. But it\'s OK for her to get him. He loves her. And that\'s so endearing.

Good work, dear lady!

Much love,
accio.

Very nice I like it alot and to be honest this is one of few Harry Potter fics I\'ve ever read. If I could make a suggestion though...I think your lemon scenes need to be longer, not like pages longer, but a few paragraphs maybe. It could just be me, maybe I\'m just a weirdo, but that\'s my opinion. Otherwise I rather think this story is awesome.

I think Draco\'s right: Harry would have made a good Slytherin! Once again, a fantabulous chapter! Hermione was written very well - how many girls can HONESTLY say they have never felt insecure about their looks? What I would give for Draco Malfoy to show me otherwise though..... *hot flash*! A pregnant Ginny could provide hours of entertainment via moods as long as you did not have to deal with her daily though - poor Harry! Thank you for making my study week before exams bearable!

Mmmm, delish! I like how Draco is friendly with Hermione\'s loved ones in this story. Makes for a much more enjoyable read, IMO, than the sniping I\'ve read in other stories. Keep on with the fabulous writing!

Cheers,
Michelle

beautiful as always :)

wonderful new chapter. Hermmione\'s insecurity was depicted very realistically....how many of us have had a guy worship every part of you, and still you feel as though you don;t measure up. *sigh* us girls are so silly lol. Harry\'s panic attack was adorable! I knew immediately what was happening, as obviously you weren\'t about to throw too much drama (ie. return of dark lord, mass murders, etc) into this sweet little tale. I love his and Hermione\'s relationship. They\'re so close, and love each other so much, but it doesn\'t stretch an inch beyond friendship. perfect :) Draco was delicious as always, of course.
No complaints here, you\'ve done a wonderful job :)

I loved the pet name: baby. It made my toes curl. lol. you made my day. I hope you continue a little more with this story, make it a little longer then the last one, which was damn good in my opinion. I can\'t wait for you to update a new chapter. Hope to hear for your soon, kind of funny how harry make draco look bad, i cracked up.

The apperance of the conniving twins! Beautiful chapter. Though I have to say, after a tramatic google image searck of \"erect penis\" (don\'t ask...it was late, I was talking with Briel), the descriptions of draco and his \"leaking, swollen organ\" did not inspire the reaction they normally do. But other than my distressing experience...very entertaining.

that was me, by the way, the conniving twins comment.