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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person cleopatra
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love that first meeting with the parents dont you?! Im supposed to be studying but as usual, im looking for ways to procrastinate and your story is always perfect for that! Thank you for taking the time to actually write this and update instead of doing what many of us do (myself included!) and just thinking about it.
person Kristal
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! yey! i got an actual review!! woot!
not just one of those \"oh thnx for reading!\"
lol i love it!! cus i usually get one of those! :(
i wanna know what Mr. Granger said to Draco.. it must\'ve been good if DRACO cowered! (sp?)
poor crookshanks, she left him! but aren\'t we all glad?? lol
well i wont promote anymore fear in you! lol i stopped by your live journal! (but you obviously knew tht)
so ill ask nicely: \"Please Please Please with a cherry on top, update asap!\"
kk thnx
bye
Kristal
(emails, oh i love emails!)
P.S. im kinda hyper...if you cant tell! :-P
person Amada
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believed I cried (No, it was not sleep deprivation...it was your story.) Ah, so well written. HAve I said so enough? This chapter was delightful. Both funny and poignant. Looooooove it!

PS: I am cold but have no Draco....*sniff*
person snarky4severus
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what her father actually did to him. Hmm... Well atleast after the initial \"discomfort\" things started looking up, especially when her father and Draco ganged up on Hermione and her lack of security, etc. Heh.
person Mrs. Malfoy
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG..this is such a good story...i dint think i was going to like it in the beggining..but it truly is good...keep up the good job!...i cant wait for the next chapter
much love
mrs. malfoy
person Kueble
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I just found the story tonight and read everything you\'ve posted so far. Can\'t wait for the next section.
person eddie
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter. I\'m feeling insecure too. Maybe Draco could come soothe me as well? LOL. Harry is too adorable. I do love the way you\'ve written him. And Draco\'s reaction was hilarious. \"Well done, Potter.\"
person Tashi
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is a GREAT story! Please email me when you update again, I would appreciate it so much...I\'d love you almost I as much as I love Tom Felton.
This was such a fabulous story, I love it TONS! And from this writer, to another, your plot is great. I write Hermione/Draco fics too, but they are just R-rated on fanfiction.net. Update soon please! Thanks!
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was expecting this to be much better than it was from the number of reviews. The characters are all wrong, there is no plot and most of it just doesn\'t make sense. I guess that you\'re trying to write a romance. Here\'s a tip. Read the books. They are nothing like what you have written.
person LilyCat
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is a bit out of character. I dunno why you feel the need to make him more like Draco but it seemed a bit off. I know it happened in the movie but Draco made a move first then run saw and tried to copy it. It wasn\'t like that.